A person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contract and should not retain any civil rights or the right to benefit from his or her own labor
Commiting of crime by any person is breaking of the social contracts. And, breaking of this right should not allow any benifit from his or her own efforts as the speaker asserts. I am in in consonent with the first half of the speakers' assertion. However, but, conditional in the second half of the contention. Every citizen have right or entitlement of his work or any kinds of labour, but, in some cases, these entitlement can be withdraw by the government if some condition arises. The given contentions are discussed with the three reasons.
Every society has a certain norms, which every members of the socity has to follow it. If they violate these laws they can be punishe by the society--and in broader context, by the country as a whole. For instance, any peron found to be accused of harrassment, he should be done proper investigation, and should be punished. Some persons, like drunkard-- or anybody, who disturbs the other members of socity at late night or any time of the day; then he/she really violates the social contract. Any person might theft someone house of someone or impedes in somebody activities, it is really brokenof the social contract.
As any person should be credited from his/her own labor. It is the entitlement of his efforts. For instances, if any poor labour is accused in the charge of robbery, in this case; seizing of his other propery and alienated from the society is not good. The person should not be deprived from the right like enfranchisement, compensationa and other many entitlements in the socity and/or country as a whole.
However, in the certain case, when any civil cervants is found to impeachment of any crime, then, he should be seized of his all right and facilities provided by the government, not only in the present instances, but also in his further life. Recently, the honorable speaker of Nepal, was accused of sexual harrasmrent to one of the lady staff. In this type of case, he should be seized his all benifit provided by the govenment at a instant perios and in upcoming period too--like the compensation provided by any government to him. The government officer who were found to be involved in the criminal and out of norms should be punished more as compared to any normal citizens. If the lawmaker or any executive or any pundits were found in the wrong activities--it will be the worst scenario.
Thus, any person who violates the norms. rules and regulations of the society or a country, they should be punished. However, the level of punishment should be ammended in the basis of different criteria by the government.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
...wn efforts as the speaker asserts. I am in in consonent with the first half of the sp...
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Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'speakers'' or 'speaker's'?
Suggestion: speakers'; speaker's
...in consonent with the first half of the speakers assertion. However, but, conditional in...
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Line 1, column 408, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this entitlement' or 'these entitlements'?
Suggestion: this entitlement; these entitlements
...ny kinds of labour, but, in some cases, these entitlement can be withdraw by the government if so...
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Line 3, column 29, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'norm'?
Suggestion: norm
... reasons. Every society has a certain norms, which every members of the socity has ...
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Line 3, column 527, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'houses'.
Suggestion: houses
...ontract. Any person might theft someone house of someone or impedes in somebody activ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... really brokenof the social contract. As any person should be credited from his/...
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Line 7, column 433, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ll benifit provided by the govenment at a instant perios and in upcoming period t...
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Line 7, column 645, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...nd out of norms should be punished more as compared to any normal citizens. If the...
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Line 9, column 42, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Rules
...hus, any person who violates the norms. rules and regulations of the society or a cou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, really, second, so, then, thus, as to, for instance, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2160.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 446.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84304932735 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76784890349 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468609865471 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 684.9 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.072504894 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9130434783 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3913043478 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21739130435 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319311293422 0.243740707755 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995927072047 0.0831039109588 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102050594027 0.0758088955206 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190660261142 0.150359130593 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714573018287 0.0667264976115 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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