Parents today are more involved in their children's education than parents were in the past.
Education makes a person lucid. Our society is changing every day. In the past, our parents or grandparents do not seek the importance of education. However, today education is one of the momentous things in our life. Personally I believe that parents of today's generation more participate in education for their children as compared to the past. I feel this way for the two reasons, which I would express in the following essays.
There is a proverb that little knowledge is very dangerous. Although every person has some basic level of instinct, to become specialize in relevant matters he/she needs to be learned about it. Thus, it is a fundamental part of our life. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. My grandparents teaches to my father only up to the high school level. However, my father enforced me to study further even I have passed Master. The generation have changed a lot. Unless we become educated we would not be able to tackle the different problems which were encountered in my life. This education really prepares a person for his future. Day by day, new problems exist on this earth. Recently, the world has faced a pandemic crisis i.e COVID19. To control this problem, it should be either eradicate or prevent. For the both process, a human should be aware and should have knowledge of it for combat. That's why education was observed to be of utmost importance.
Finally, every parent has a dream to look at living a happier life by their children, for which one should have to get a good job. The population of the earth is increasing day by day. As a result, competition increases commensurately. Consequently, to have a good employment he/ she must be well educated. For example, Any employee selects a person having a higher degree in his employment. It is the basic protocol of each company. Moreover, in the past, our parents can get a job with reading basic courses, and today there is a compulsion for a certain degree for a specific post in the company.
In summation, I am of the opinion that parents always want their children to become more qualified, tackle different problems, and better ensure the good life in the future during this generation. Therefore, they were always worried about the good and quality education of their childrens.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: That's
...should have knowledge of it for combat. Thats why education was observed to be of utm...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, however, if, look, moreover, really, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, i feel, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1904.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 394.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83248730964 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76528637395 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53807106599 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4063558313 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.6551724138 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5862068966 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.10344827586 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.88709677419 286% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238998082913 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559470295156 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0982444360188 0.0737576698707 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182680678414 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107370009044 0.0645574589148 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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