A person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contract and should not retain any civil rights or the right to benefit from his or her own labor
The rule of laws are theren to guide our actions in a community. Wherever there is no rule, anarchy may soon result in the community. While it is important to maintain orderliness in our society, should this precludes the sinner ability right to enjoy the social benefits. the prompt suggest that law breakers should not benefit from the goodness of the society as they have relinquish their right by disregarding the law. While I moderately agree with this assertion, due to two resons that will be discuss below. I still have my reservations regarding its application in extreme scenarios which will be subsequently developed.
Firstly, denying miscreants of certain social benefits will probe to serve as a deterent to others having such subversive idea. Take for instances, a high school with a guiding rules and principle which strive to uphold justice against wrong doers and perpetrators. This such school will imbibe in its students, the appriopriate regards for social contract by punishing the rule breakers through the denial of their basic right. Say for example, the right to use certain facilities in the school which they had paid for. However, reverse will be the case for a diametrically opposing school which seems lax with its judgement. if this situation is enforced in such principled school, it will definitely serve as a warning to thode who might want to commit such malfeasance.
Secondly, punishing dissents and rule breakers will do much to prevent against impunity from other members of the society. By ensuring that those who disregard the proprietry of the community, those who decidedly wants to have their way at the expense of others, it will prevents the notion of blatant disregard of rules from other citizens of such environment. If perhaps, wrong doers are dandled and cosseted, it will send a wrong message to other member of the community in doing such improper misconducts next time.
Although, upholding the rule of laws is important in keeping a sane society, doing do at the extraneous detriment of the miscreants may not be adequately justified. The fundamental code guiding the human activities has its basis embedded in freedom of speech and rights to certain benefits in the society. If the benefits of unprincipled individuals are denied them, this may lead to the steppping on the fundamental rights of such individuals. this will constitute breaking the law on the side of the law enforcer. Moreover, it may even lead to anarchy with dissent wanting to topple the prevailing leaders. Humanity dictates certain confersion of clemency on miscreants and this will be consider as a benevolent leader.
In conclusion, while it is necessary to punish evil doers in the society, it is much more important to do so in a corrective manner. Tempering the justice with mercy is considered as the best gift of a true leader.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2404.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 474.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07172995781 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66599839874 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82374646981 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506329113924 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 736.2 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6666232101 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.52173913 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6086956522 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69565217391 5.21951772744 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118843872824 0.243740707755 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362784119993 0.0831039109588 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475012869627 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0626321459299 0.150359130593 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381086223853 0.0667264976115 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 100.480337079 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.