A person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contract and should not retain any civil rights or the right to benefit from his or her own labor.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
The author contends that a person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contract and should not retain any civil rights or the right to benefit from his or her own labor. I agree that those who does a crime intentionally, they should be punished, however, it should be depended in time period and circumstances.
First of all, crime is usually done in a two way, one way is unknowingly or unintentionally and another is knowingly or intentionally. I agree that those who commits a crime intentionally, they should be punished severely. For example, if a person kills a another person intentionally, he should be charged heavily, that is, he should be locked up in a prison for several years. Perhaps, after many years in prison may help him realize the crime he has done. If any criminal realizes his or her mistake, then I believe that he should retain any civil rights or right to benefit from his or her own labor. I think, devoiding him through all of his or her entire life from civil rights violates the fundamental human rights. Additionally, it is specious to restric any criminal from retaining any civil rights after when he realizes his or her fault. Of course, human being is a emotional being and in caprice mood, sometime people may tend to conduct crime but later ma realize and never repeat again.
Second of all, crimes are different, some are very trifling like traffic light violation, and some are very intense like killing any people. The punishment of course should be different, those criminal who have done big scale crime they should be punished highly however, those crime which are minor, their punishment should be lifted in short time period. Human being are of course any superior being, even knowing any crime, people may accidently conduct crime, so regariding the circumstances and the intensity of cirme, a person should be punished accordingly. For example, if a person violates a traffic light rules, he should not be punished if his cause to violate the rule is genuine, for supporting example, one of my friend last months violated the traffic rule, however, the case was, he was conveying his wife to the hospital since she was seriously facing heart attact, but later court did not punihsed him. Hence, the circumstances should also be considered.
Third of all, even the intensity of a crime is high, then circumstances also should play a huge role. For supporting example, if a person is going to blast a bomb in a densly populated area but priorly his friends knew that and killed him on the way, then that should not be considered crime since that friend saved several innocent people's lives.
In sum, even if a person knowingly commits a crime and broken the social contract, the circumstances and the intensities of crime should be considered.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 37, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a two way" with adverb for "two"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... First of all, crime is usually done in a two way, one way is unknowingly or unintentiona...
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Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...everely. For example, if a person kills a another person intentionally, he should...
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Line 3, column 876, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...or her fault. Of course, human being is a emotional being and in caprice mood, so...
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Line 3, column 988, Rule ID: REPEAT_AGAIN[1]
Message: Use simply 'repeat'.
Suggestion: repeat
...ct crime but later ma realize and never repeat again. Second of all, crimes are differen...
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Line 5, column 273, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this crime' or 'those crimes'?
Suggestion: this crime; those crimes
...they should be punished highly however, those crime which are minor, their punishment shoul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, second, so, then, third, for example, i think, in short, of course, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 34.0 19.5258426966 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2337.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 481.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85862785863 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68313059816 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69234060295 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.440748440748 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 735.3 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 6.24550561798 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.7989038114 60.3974514979 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.833333333 118.986275619 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7222222222 23.4991977007 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 5.21951772744 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 5.13820224719 292% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315479703485 0.243740707755 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131927890626 0.0831039109588 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141338272772 0.0758088955206 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23113926615 0.150359130593 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13124035358 0.0667264976115 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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