The primary goal of education is to get a job.
First of all, what is education? Education can be anything from learning a language to learning how to cook. Many times we attend classes to learn a different sport which doesn’t mean that we want to pursue our career in that particular sport. We just do that for our hobbies. Even if the author is talking about academic education then also a person completing his education will not necessarily do a job he might do business or might pursue his passion as a career. So according to me primary aim of education is to develop skills in person in that particular field. After development of skills that person can do anything he wants and job is not the only option left for him.
Pursuing education in a particular field and doing job or career in that field are 2 different things. For example, famous cricketer and also ex captain of Indian Cricket Team Anil Kumble is an IIT Graduate. Billionaire Elon Musk, the founder of Tesla and SpaceX has done his graduation in Arts. Just imagine if Elon Musk would have pursued his career in Arts field and Anil Kumble would have decided to pursue career as an engineer then we would not have got such talents.
Also, instead of job someone might start his own business. For example, a Mechanical Engineer who has completed his Bachelors might start his own Automobile Parts manufacturing workshop or a Civil Engineer wants to start his own Construction Company after completing his education. So in such cases these student were not having job as their primary goal.
But in today's world of competition the primary goal of education is to get a job. As we see many students are not pursuing career in the fields in which they are interested but in the field where jobs are available. For example, many Mechanical Engineers who are not interested in things like coding etc but are learning coding for better job opportunities. But due to lack of interest in that particular field it leads to depression, anxiety etc.
Atlast, I just want to say that primary goal of education differs person to person. Someone might be learning something as an hobby, someone might be learning something to start his own business, or someone who is not at all interested in studies might studying just to get a degree. So going to the conclusion that primary goal of education is to get a job is not appropriate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, for example, talking about, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1946.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 411.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73479318735 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64184507011 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462287104623 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 606.6 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.7159624136 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6666666667 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 5.21951772744 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.83258426966 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311298829769 0.243740707755 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130980360408 0.0831039109588 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.185558232012 0.0758088955206 245% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190891585369 0.150359130593 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10526512582 0.0667264976115 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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