Q. The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
According to the author we should to instill sense of cooperation rather than competition in young people in order to prepare them for the leadership roles. Cooperation has always been an essential quality of a good leader therefore I agree with the author's claim.
One of the cardinal quality of a leader is to sacrifice his or own ego and cooperate with others in order to reform its people life. From childhood we are made to work on various group projects, sometimes we did'nt like our group still we worked together to complete projects. Similiarly, leaders will be faced with many such situations where in they will need to cooperate with their rivals for the betterment of the organization. For instance, In India during COVID pandemic different ministers of diiferent states worked together to eradicate covid from the country, if there were dissentation between the states than this would not have been possible.
Furthermore, cooperation teaches young people to make compromises for betterment while competition adds preasure on them to outperform their rival. For instance, In India to get admission in IIT 's students study rigorously for 2 years due to severe competition the stress on student builds up soo much that few people end their life if they fail to get a good rank.
However, I concede that there should be some amount of competiton often in order to bring best from the leaders. Sometimes sense of competition encourages people to perform better otherwise they would get complacent and would'nt try hard to progress. For instance, Employess in the company try their best to get employee of the month award. The award does create a sense of competition among employess which encourages them to perform their best.
In conclusion, Cooperation is one of the most skills of good leader and should be instilled in young people. However they should also be thought about competiton but not to the extent that they start taking stress about the failures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 328.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0487804878 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71288018853 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548780487805 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1514169101 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.285714286 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 5.21951772744 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243018415873 0.243740707755 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879323060652 0.0831039109588 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073618207432 0.0758088955206 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137233974966 0.150359130593 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628573571046 0.0667264976115 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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