Scandals are useful because they direct our attention on problem in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
The assertion that scandals can attract our attention effectively is justifiable in some sense. however, we must also realize the limitation of such concentration. The spotlight engendered by scandals can hardly serve as a positive phenomenon. In other words, the disadvantages of scandals might outweigh their advantages.
It is unassailable that the public is prone to be swayed by deliberately conceived scandals, since scandals are usually more intriguing than the fact. In virtue of the Internet, some scandals can disseminate through the world as a tremendous speed, which undermines future revelation. The attention around scandals may be the central issue of the common people's talks. For example, people are more interested in affairs around celebrities than those reform in politics or advancement in science, which is self-evident from the hot topic list on each social website. On the contrary, even if governors is announcing a policy closely related to people's everyday life, few of them are willing to read the government report. Thus, nothing can attract people more than scandals.
however, the attention on scandals upswings notably while declines drastically as well. people's attention never stops changing. At one time they may talk about the divorce of a singer, and then they will turn to invectives between two renowned actresses. The rapid emergence and disappearance mean the attention brought by scandals can never survive long enough to have an impact on critical social issues. scandals resemble more a type of recreation than a serious concentration of social attention. hence, with respect to the width and depth of attention induced, scandals are all but negligible.
Furthermore, the inaccuracy of information contained in scandals might defame celebrities, or even undermine social stability. The discrepancy between scandals and real-world accelerates their promulgation. however, such characteristic induces invidious people to make up fake news against their enemies. It is not uncommon that some famous people suffered from unjustifiable accusations, most of whom underwent hardship in their lives afterward. such attacks are infamous but the indispensable outcome of scandal promulgation. even worse, some foreign attackers may use scandals to obviate people's trust in the government. The fabricated stories about officials' lives are most likely to trigger the unease in the country, hence undermine the prosperity of the nation. The radical opinion of the public is easily begotten by scandals.
In sum, despite the effectiveness of scandals' ability to attract the public's attention, such focus is both transient and potentially harmful. hence, we should not squander scandals to attract the public. despite the fact that such attention is useful under a few circumstances, such as promoting reform in the immaturity of registration, calling for concerns for underprivileged ethnic groups, the scrutiny of scandals should be in a meticulous stance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, such as, in other words, on the contrary, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 12.9106741573 194% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2557.0 2235.4752809 114% => OK
No of words: 453.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64459161148 5.05705443957 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08374852148 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 215.323595506 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565121412804 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 792.0 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.7977602318 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7037037037 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7777777778 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.48148148148 5.21951772744 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 18.0 5.13820224719 350% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172984533787 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485039487959 0.0831039109588 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383855459985 0.0758088955206 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103139778017 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035297326668 0.0667264976115 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.1639044944 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 100.480337079 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.