Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
Whether it is politics, business or life of a common man, every one tries to trick others in order to make profit or for their own benefits. Until those crimes or tricks are not recognized they are not scandals but they have been recognized they are termed as scandals because they can guide wide range of people to be cautious and alert for them. Therfore, I concur the fact that scandals focus our attention towards those problems which had affected others and we try to be more cautious about them.
On the first facet, one of the biggest fiddlement in the history was done by Frank Abignale Jr. He was known for copy the cheques of various banks and used them withdraw money from the banks. Till then no one was aware of the fact that the cheques can be copied too. However, his actions made bankers to think and to make more higher security standards. However, Frank Abignale was hired by the bank itself to validate for the cheques but this scandal made everyone focus on the problem that no speaker could have made.
Furthermore, in India government lend money to high class businessmen on their goodwill in the market. A high class businessman Vijay Malya was having a loan of over five hundered million. Due to change in bank policies as guided by the government, bank started questioning Vijay about the installments which he was not able to pay. Therefore, Malya decided to leave country with over five hundred million loan on him. This scandal has been treated as one of the darkest moment in Indian history and that lead to further more leery rules for giving loans.
Additionally, the terror attack of 26/11 in Mumbai, India also made government to put more intense measures on the security. As a group of terrorist infiltrated Taj Hotel in Mumbai and slautered innocuous and benign people there. This event gave the cringe of fear to each and every citizen of india and coerced government to enhance security standards. Not only in India but all around the world when any terror attack happened it rang a bell on the ears of government to reiterate all the systems and analyze where they are lacking.
In crux, yes I do agree with the fact that scandals are useful as they focus our attetion on problems and we analyze the problem more logically. It does not only alert the victim but it work as an alarm bell for thousands of people around the victim and they in turn become more prudent and heedful in their lives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use only 'higher' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: higher
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Line 9, column 19, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'agree that'.
Suggestion: agree that
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Message: Did you mean 'works'?
Suggestion: works
...t does not only alert the victim but it work as an alarm bell for thousands of peopl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.6327345309 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.9520958084 23% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 11.1786427146 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 28.8173652695 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 55.5748502994 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2012.0 2260.96107784 89% => OK
No of words: 432.0 441.139720559 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65740740741 5.12650576532 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.56307096286 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33320472897 2.78398813304 84% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 204.123752495 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523148148148 0.468620217663 112% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 705.55239521 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.8473053892 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1282760179 57.8364921388 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.777777778 119.503703932 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 23.324526521 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.70786347227 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 6.88822355289 174% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208234577892 0.218282227539 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547371914584 0.0743258471296 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842685038136 0.0701772020484 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108798004378 0.128457276422 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812452965852 0.0628817314937 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.3799401198 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.3550499002 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.5979740519 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.32208582834 97% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 98.500998004 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 12.3882235529 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.1389221557 104% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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