Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
No one can understate the fact that;Humans love scandals.This is the reason we love hollywood and reality tv shows. And scandals generally are a perfect blend of sensationalism and an a everyday issue. In the past, Scandals have uncovered major issues and scams like 2G spectrum scan of India to loopholes in our bureaucracy through snowden's Wikileaks. However, I believe that although these are some of the most pertinent issues of there time, reformers and activists have also played a major role in solving or highlighting some of the most essential problem in the society.
To begin, corruption was one of the most biggest problem of the Indian society in early 2000s, it's was everywhere from politics to bureaucracy, from court to private sectors. This is one of the reason Indian economy never never grew with it's full potential, the FDI was low and inflation was high. But after a series of scandals, whistle blowers and sting operations, a number of scams such as coal auction scam, commonwealth game scam, fodder scam etc. was discovered, this lead to widespread anger, protest and eventually a loss for the incumbent party. The new government did many radical reform and as a result FDI increased, corruption became almost not existent in higher levels of bureaucracy and politics and India became the third largest economy of the world. This is perfect example of a success story that started from a scandal. Without this, it's highly likely that the story would be completely different.
However, similar success are achieved even without a scandal, reformers and speakers have brought major changes in the society through completely disparate methods. For example, Nelson Mandela spoke against the atrocities of the British government, he highlighted the issue in world form through his charismatic speeches and inspired millions of South Africans to stands up against the social injustice of racial discrimination. Similarly, Mahatma Gandhi through his idea of non violence lead India to stand up against the British Empire and demand freedom. Both are great leader and still a inspirations of people around the world. This shows that speakers and activist have achieved equally success in the past to garner public attention.
It's is a complex issue. There are numerous examples in which either a scandal or a activist has started a great movement or a reform. It can not be said that, one is better than the other or more effective.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, similarly, so, still, third, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2055.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 402.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11194029851 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74373598877 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574626865672 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7636233983 60.3974514979 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.157894737 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1578947368 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52631578947 5.21951772744 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0803581390586 0.243740707755 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.024942688323 0.0831039109588 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0281208399795 0.0758088955206 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.055378484615 0.150359130593 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02646331213 0.0667264976115 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 100.480337079 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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