Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Understanding the problems of the society through scandals is not good.The prompt suggests that scandals are a good medium of information. In my opinion, i strongly disagree with the suggestion and argue that the scandals are harmful to the society and they can only propogate negative thoughts in the reader minds for two reasons.
To begin, scandals often bring hot news for people. it certainly brings focus on the issues which are not considered important in every day life. However , their single sided representation cannot be considered useful as it might induce false emotions in to the public. Most of the scandals use a particular loophole in the system of any organization and exploit it to an extent such that it backfires. Revealing the details of the scandal will also reveal the loopholes in the sytem to public. Allowing the public to try and implement the scandal on their own.
Further these scandal infuse negative/criminal thoughts into the brains of the public. These thoughts may not lead them to commit a scam. But there will be a greater risk of them commiting a malpractice. In worst case scenario one might commit even henious crimes.
Even if we assume that the information of the scandal is safe to reveal and does not enrage public. There are many ways to get details of a particular problem. By examining the problem in and out one can grasp the whole details of the problem and how to solve it.
Of course some argue that scandals are informative. But at what cost? they may lure one to to scam. People have right to know about the scams and scandals but they are not the only source to focus on problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 2235.4752809 61% => OK
No of words: 285.0 442.535393258 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76140350877 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64767518251 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554385964912 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 704.065955056 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3374733577 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.4210526316 118.986275619 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 23.4991977007 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 5.13820224719 292% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155363543844 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432634564085 0.0831039109588 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0273121473123 0.0758088955206 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792030940156 0.150359130593 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291152612582 0.0667264976115 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 14.1392134831 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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