It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are generated and preserved.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Cities are the main hotspots of any country. A major population of the country lives around and inside the city. This makes the cultural aspects of the city more vibrant. The prompt says that it is primarily in cities a nation's cultural traditions are generated and preserved. In my opinion, I mostly disagree with the prompt for three reasons.
To begin, cities are a vital clog in the development of a nation, but that does not mean that they withhold the country's traditions. For instance, consider the New York city, it is famous for its diversity and multi-national cultures. However, it does not mean that the New York city is the cultural hub of the USA. The presence of many cultures makes it difficult to emphasize only on USA traditions in the city. The city is obliged to equally respect all other cultures. Simply, cosmopolitan cities cannot give much priority to its own country's traditions, without belittling other country's traditions.
Further, in this ever-evolving world, very few people give any importance to the traditions and the cultures of the country, and a large portion of such population are from cities. City life at times can be the most exhausting one. People living in cities rarely find leisure time to take care of themselves let alone the traditions and cultures. In this situation it is somewhat aggrandization to say that cities are the ones which preserve and generate the traditions.
However, some aspects of the city play crucial role in preserving of the country's traditions and culture simultaneously being secular. Cities act as the gateway between the foreign cultures and the country's very own cultures. The celebration of any particular festival in a city might introduce this to a totally outsider who is unaware of the traditions and cultures of the country. In this way Cities can be the great source of highlighting the country's traditions.
Some people may argue that the cities contain many cultures and thus it is great ambassador of the country's tradition, but is it really true? many cities have to compromise their own cultures in order to be a cosmopolitan city. Hence in my opinion it is somewhat obvious that cities are not mostly preserving the country's traditions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a nation' or simply 'nations'?
Suggestion: a nation; nations
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Many
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, really, so, thus, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1869.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 372.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02419354839 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82974896207 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470430107527 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4817203548 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.9545454545 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.40909090909 5.21951772744 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191479470858 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665325545672 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453358860596 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121863748502 0.150359130593 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329995693078 0.0667264976115 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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