Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
In the current situation, where social media and, information on internet has been a part of human life; with it comes the good and bad news, help post, and the real-time news. The prompt emphasizes the role of what we call viral news that generally points the negative aspect of a recognized person or an organization. I mostly agree with the prompt with two reasons but also present a case where this unwantedly popular information might have a very negative influence.
It is human nature to get more attracted to negative news more and if it is of a well-known person or an established company the attraction automatically increases. The attraction further increases if we hear more frequently about the news. We people in common don’t mostly care about how a government body, educational institutions, social organizations are running. But for instance, if a news of corruption becomes popular now, we dramatically focus our attention to how is the organization working; how are the board of directors and members, what other bad things have happened in the organization in past. Certainly, public also provides pressure and support for the responsible authority to correct the misdeed. People also keep in mind and watch closely to the department for some time in future which will most probably not be the case if they have heard only once or twice in a daily news channel.
Scandals are also so far reached and deeply rooted in minds of public that it provides awareness to people in an indirect way. People have known already that they must only treat in an authorized hospital and by an authorized doctor. They frequently ignore this because of various reasons like lacking hospitals nearby; to save money by visiting unauthorized personnel. But a popular news of suppose death of a person due to bad treatment or chicanery removal of some inner organs inspires fear in people to treat in not authenticated or even not so famous institutions. This fear is a good habit which cannot be encouraged by a motivational speech.
However, scandals don’t always expose bad activity but sometimes tend to expose seemingly bad activity of an erudite person or institution. For example, a celebrity if somehow misses to greet a co-worker or in some bad mood talks harshly is so criticized that has caused so many mental pressures in them. These so-called bad scandals are so devastating that it ruins the celebrity career and in a worst-case scenario have themselves succumbed to suicide by not being able to overcome the pressure from public.
Thus, it can be inferred that scandals do not always focus our attention to problems but sometimes leads us to closely look at some issues that is not so harsh depending on the case presented. So, people instead of blindly following the scandal must first carefully think about the conditions in which such cases might appear.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 390, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
...tions are running. But for instance, if a news of corruption becomes popular now, we d...
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Line 3, column 604, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...hings have happened in the organization in past. Certainly, public also provides pressu...
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Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an indirect way" with adverb for "indirect"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ic that it provides awareness to people in an indirect way. People have known already that they mu...
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Line 5, column 375, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'popular news'.
Suggestion: popular news
...by visiting unauthorized personnel. But a popular news of suppose death of a person due to bad...
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Line 7, column 177, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'misses greeting'.
Suggestion: misses greeting
...on. For example, a celebrity if somehow misses to greet a co-worker or in some bad mood talks h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, then, thus, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2409.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 482.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9979253112 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8181705398 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 215.323595506 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526970954357 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 775.8 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7611416529 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.789473684 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3684210526 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42105263158 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111889592243 0.243740707755 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357648570233 0.0831039109588 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331042136184 0.0758088955206 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0661464206559 0.150359130593 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342634801763 0.0667264976115 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 100.480337079 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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