Starting from the technology to control fire to using it to run a vehicle, from invention of wheel to modern day scientific break through like landing a rocket back on earth - all have solved an immense number of societal problems. However, we see that same technology has been used to create problems by vicious minds.
We might have invented a machine gun to protect ourselves from dangerous threats. But the world has evidently scene more innocent lives been lost with a terrorist attack. Unless we fix the mind's that use technology to create problems, we will always have problems to deal with.
We are using technology to solve lot of problems that are currently known. However, technology in itself brings up new issues, which were never thought of. For instance, plastic management was never an issue in , before the invention of plastic. Global warming was not a concern for humanity until before few centuries of industrialization. Living in this ever expanding universe, we will always have something new to discover, invent and solve problems associated with it.
Though we will always have a new issue to look into, technology has indeed solved most of the problems that earlier generations have thought off. The dream of flying, the desire to talk to your beloved once in other corner of the world, the ambition to build a machine that does math for you - are all a reality now. We indeed went to moon, after some generations of poets offering to do so in their poems. But there is more ! we are on a mission to be on mars, and we a myriad number of planets to cover!
So to summarize, technology has definitely solved many of our problems. However this wonderful tool will become futile if the minds using it are not fixed. It is important to acknowledge that , we will always have new issues to look into.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 58, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'runs'?
Suggestion: runs
... technology to control fire to using it run a vehicle, from invention of wheel to m...
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Line 1, column 230, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...an immense number of societal problems. . However, we see that same technology ha...
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Line 5, column 211, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...plastic management was never an issue in , before the invention of plastic. Global...
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Line 7, column 142, Rule ID: THINK_OFF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'of'?
Suggestion: of
...s that earlier generations have thought off. The dream of flying , a desire to see ...
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Line 7, column 166, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ns have thought off. The dream of flying , a desire to see a a musical concert hap...
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Line 7, column 185, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
.... The dream of flying , a desire to see a a musical concert happening in some corne...
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Line 7, column 185, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
.... The dream of flying , a desire to see a a musical concert happening in some cor...
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Line 7, column 185, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
.... The dream of flying , a desire to see a a musical concert happening in some corne...
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Line 7, column 387, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... so in their poems. But there is more ! we are on a mission to be on mars, and we ...
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Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of planets to cover! So to summarize, technology has definitely solved many of...
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Line 9, column 74, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...definitely solved many of our problems. However this wonderful tool will become futile ...
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Line 9, column 143, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...ill become futile if the minds using it are not fixed. It is important to acknowled...
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Line 9, column 193, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...xed. It is important to acknowledge that , we will always have new issues to look ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 307.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82410423453 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63350274124 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563517915309 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9082433624 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5625 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.21951772744 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202183349316 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701502295586 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614915242083 0.0758088955206 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122316808517 0.150359130593 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280393531388 0.0667264976115 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 100.480337079 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.