Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems.
The development of science and technology does make our life become more conveniet. With the access to internet available for most of the people in the world, we can do almost everything. And with the advance of health care, the avaerage life expectancy has increased. While science and technology progress seem unremitting, it will not be able to solve all of society's problems.
There is always limitation for science and technology. Take the ubiquitous deep learning technology as example. It is famous that computer is able to compute the relations of factors. However, without enough learning data, it is still not able to make prediction. Human's control of the learning process, like preventing overfitting is also needed or it could not be a useful model. Because of the limitation, human's intervention is always needed.
However, the technology and science does progress quickly so the problem today might be solved tomorrow, but new problems follow. For example, after the widespread of smartphone, the invade of privacy is a problem to be solved.
Science and technology does make impossible things possible for humans. Just like more unpredictable progress happens, more forseable limitation and new problems occur. So science and technology may not be able to solve all of society's problem one day.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 180, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...le, after the widespread of smartphone, the invade of privacy is a problem to be solved. ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 33.0505617978 21% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 58.6224719101 39% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1110.0 2235.4752809 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 210.0 442.535393258 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28571428571 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 4.55969084622 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85942765787 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 215.323595506 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561904761905 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 704.065955056 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.3797411896 60.3974514979 35% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.0 118.986275619 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 23.4991977007 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.86666666667 5.21951772744 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.482700244189 0.243740707755 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148113980567 0.0831039109588 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.209567130108 0.0758088955206 276% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285939096509 0.150359130593 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128431115197 0.0667264976115 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 48.8420337079 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.81 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 100.480337079 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.