Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
We are now living in an era that we can know everything just by searching on the internet. Whether it is important to know about events happening around the world is always a long-debated issue. However, I personally disagree that we should know everthing happening even thousands of miles aways from us. I feel this way because of the reasons I will explore in the following essay.
First and foremost, most information is not relative to our daily life. Knowing the news around the world has been tempting because our brains get excited if we absorb new information, though it may do little help to us. For example, sometimes I browse the news websites, and end up reading articles one after another. Some of them are stories like famous celebrities broke up with their spouses, which is fun to know indeed. However, I don't know them and there is nothing to do with me. As a result, I just end up wasting my time watching someone else's life.
Furthermore, events or news reported can be misleading. This is because only things that don't happen that often get reported. To illustratre, in the book Factfulness, it mentioned that the reality of the other side of the world can be very different from what people suppose them to be. People may think other countries are more dangerous than their own countries. For they only get to know other counrties from news like gunshots or wars. However, that can not provide the whole picture of them.
Last but not least, everyone's time and energy is limited. While caring about what happens around the world, focusing on things that happen in front of us is more important. For example, my cousin has no job so he stays home and watches a lot of new about politics around the world. What's more, he always gets angry and even debates online with people he doesn't know. That is very time-consuming and not productive. It would be more meaningful if he saves the time and energy and tries to find a job to make a living.
In summation, there is no need to know about every events happening around the world, especially those will not affect our daily life, due to the reasons mentioned above.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, while, for example, i feel, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1768.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67724867725 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49557711839 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544973544974 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5841646859 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8695652174 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4347826087 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73913043478 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302795399372 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756971410801 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816491842092 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178407114872 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0869966838206 0.0645574589148 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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