Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems.
Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree. Be certain to fully develop your position and carefully consider ways in which your position could be challenged.
Science and Technology will serve as a panacea to the predicaments faced by the entire world, and also will help preclude many other related problems. I strongly agree with this statement. Sure, different nations have different issues to tackle but the key to solving them would definitely require Science and technological advancements. For example, even today the whole world is relying on scientists and their research for the vaccination and drugs against the noxious COVID virus.
In the present day we cannot imagine a world without technology or science, it is required in every aspect of life. Our whole education system is teaching students to apply science in everyday life and the mode of study is hinged on technology. Due to the pandemic condition, online classes are the only means to learn anything. Without laptops or phones we cannot imagine a way of learning today. The technical advancements have made us accomplish which were once thought to be impossible. For example, Before the discovery of mobile phones, no one would have thought that it is possible to communicate with one other even while being miles away from each other. First the basic version of mobiles, which were buttoned when first discovered, solved the problem of not being able to connect with people far away. Then came the improvised version, the smart phones with a lot more features like camera, texting, etc. Using a mobile phone we can do so many things, its like the whole world is in our hand. Plane tickets can be booked in just one click, anything one likes or needs can be bought online. Many apps(social media) were built to bring people closer to their loved ones. And today, social media has become a platform to voice out concerns or any opinions for that matter. For example, many protests like the famous “Jalikattu” protest and protest for the rangers in Tamil Nadu gave it an edge because of the social media presence, it helped people to voice out their concern against the law brought about by the government. Many small businesses have come up and raised because of social media and advertising. Social media is an inseparable part of politics today.
What would the world look like today without any of these scientific and technical advancements? In terms of health and healthcare, We probably still wouldn’t have found cure to many deadly and horrendous diseases, which would have resulted in receded population rate. We probably wouldn’t have found electricity, and today we cannot imagine a world without it. It would have been a world of complete darkness without electricity.
There would not have been any kind of phones or communication, which is indispensable in today’s fast moving world. It has made our life much easier and the drudgery of everyday life is attenuated a lot.
In conclusion, Science and technology is what has made us what we are today. Everything around us is science, From animals procreating, the trees growing around us, the food we eat, to today’s healthcare, transportation, education. Technology and science goes hand in hand. And without these advancements we would not be as evolved as we are today. Science and technology are an absolute necessity to solve the existing problems and the upcoming future problems that are yet to come.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, still, then, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 14.8657303371 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2757.0 2235.4752809 123% => OK
No of words: 548.0 442.535393258 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03102189781 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83832613839 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70812449416 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 283.0 215.323595506 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516423357664 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 873.9 704.065955056 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3308822867 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 5.21951772744 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126392186935 0.243740707755 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0351861105173 0.0831039109588 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412136753199 0.0758088955206 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0686424754639 0.150359130593 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037434007503 0.0667264976115 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 100.480337079 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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