“Social media continue to reshape business communication, finding the right balance of conversation and control promises to be a never-ending challenge”. Argue on this statement bringing some tangible credible business communication examples that you are familiar with.
Social media is considered to be the biggest revolution in the today’s contemporary world. This has given so many advantages to the society in many aspects. However, talking about the acclimatization of these advantages in business communication, there may be some negative aspect in terms of diplomacy for the proper communication between businessman of the organization.
First of all, many people find the social media to be the biggest boon to the society, but there are some other people too to whom the communication delivered through social media is some-what inappropriate. For instance, lets take the example of “LinkedIn “where most of the business organization are relied upon for having communications with each other. But there may be the chance that the communication made between two different organization are not secured. It might be the case that the secret communication that are made between the two parties to get leaked. Nowadays, there are a lot of news about the hacking of social media website can be heard in Televisions and other news sources. So, if in-case any of the example that are presented above would come true, then there might be a lot of difficulties: to a particular organization” because there would’ve been a lot of stealthy information that were shared between the organizations.
Furthermore, talking about the influence of social medias in business organizations in terms of communication, there have been a lot of debates going on between different proponents of the social medias. For example, lets talk about “Social Media Influencer”, a great media icon in the contemporary society for the youths and the old people too. These influencers are totally in support of the communications through social media. Due to which this issue of social media communications has been in too much hype in the today’s world.
Finally, talking about the tangible credible business communication, e-mails would be the better option for it. There are many of the business organization which are totally relying upon the communication made through emails. For example, if there are some sort of secret information that have to be sent to other organization, then emails would be a better option because, these are made between two parties and nobody else would involve into it. This will give the proper assurance in-terms of security for the information that have been exchanged between two different business parties. For any business organization to run smoothly up-to the extent of expansion and growth, there are some sort of secrecy that has to asserted. So based upon the examples presented in this passage, it would be a good idea to have the information and communications to be shared trough emails.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... emails. For example, if there are some sort of secret information that have to be s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, as to, for example, for instance, sort of, talking about, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 10.4613686534 296% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 5.04856512141 238% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 30.3222958057 244% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 23.0 5.01324503311 459% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2320.0 1373.03311258 169% => OK
No of words: 443.0 270.72406181 164% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23702031603 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.04702891845 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10300091333 2.5805825403 120% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 145.348785872 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.417607223476 0.540411800872 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 748.8 419.366225166 179% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3804990115 49.2860985944 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.105263158 110.228320801 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3157894737 21.698381199 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94736842105 7.06452816374 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 4.33554083885 231% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264863661988 0.272083759551 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10039080557 0.0996497079465 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421098746084 0.0662205650399 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182908618187 0.162205337803 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0174783903612 0.0443174109184 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.8541721854 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.0289183223 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.2367328918 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 63.6247240618 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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