Building up healthy minded generation is the hot-button issue of the moment. Hence, such topics raises the controversial issue whether societies ought to support special talents and provide training in an early stages to develop their talents. indisputably, that children to days have to adopt and shape their future. Thus, i generally agree that societies have to bolster their roles to develop the talents.
To begin with, the first and the foremost point coming to the mind is the multifarious benefit beyond supporting talented children. In other words I would like to point out that firstly, supporting them will lead to sharpen their abilities and skills and keep them informed by every things new. For example, taking center of excellence for innovative projects as a vivid example in Jordan, this center care for all talented children and provide to them different work shops such as robotic programs, artificial intelligence and training programs. In order to flourish their abilities. Thus, it is pretty obvious that from the first point the importance of supporting the talented children
Moreover, the second vital point that could be taken into consideration is by supporting and training the children will enable them to get expose for valuable information and they will be able to communicate effectively with each others. In other words, they will widen their horizon with well rounded information and outstanding performance
Last but not least, one crucial point is by supporting them we prepare new scholars and staunch leaders for the future to have great impact by developing, producing, inventing or makes they life more safer. For instance, our ancestors past life, it was full of complexity for example they want to make a phone call they have to go to the call center in contrast nowadays they life much easier you can anyone and any time from your cell phone. In other words, that we have to invest on people as much as we can to advance the world further more.
In conclusion, due to aforementioned reasons and examples, I totally agree that we have to create suitable supporting environment for the new generations consequently that will have a positive impact on the child it self and the world in general.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 245, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Indisputably
... early stages to develop their talents. indisputably, that children to days have to adopt an...
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Line 7, column 196, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'safer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: safer
...producing, inventing or makes they life more safer. For instance, our ancestors past life,...
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Line 9, column 214, Rule ID: IT_SELF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'itself'?
Suggestion: itself
...ill have a positive impact on the child it self and the world in general.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in general, such as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1881.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 369.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09756097561 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70456902939 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558265582656 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.4480696988 60.3974514979 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.692307692 118.986275619 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3846153846 23.4991977007 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.2307692308 5.21951772744 273% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2371978383 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872967724169 0.0831039109588 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060586733596 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12616788987 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678573256803 0.0667264976115 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 14.1392134831 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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