Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In recent time, there is no doubt that the world has changed in all the life fields, and we should cope with these changes in useful manner. However, it has been argued that some people prefer to work very quickly although with taking some risks and making mistakes. On the other hand, many people think it is better to work slowly to make sure that the work is standard. In my point of view I totally agree with the prior for a lot of reasons unless each side has pros and cons. So, to substantiate my case this essay will illustrate my opinion to elaborate my preference.
To begin with, the idea of innovation comes from working under making some risk or mistakes, to produce the most great work. So, the first and the foremost idea comes to my mind that working very fast will lead to create new idea that will help the worker to provide more interest in their working. In other words, I mean thinking out the box without restricted plan will lead to great success.
Moreover, the second vital point should be taken into consideration is making some risk and some mistakes definitely will improve the job quality. To illustrate my point, by doing mistakes the worker will be able to know where is the weakness points in their job that will lead them to fix these problems, and prevent them to become more complex in the future. For instance, my brother worked on mechanical part but he was uncertain %100 that he was in the right way to fix it, but by making some risks because there was not another choice which is better than it, he fixed it and learned new information he did not know about it before.
All in all, while some people think that working with limitation and slowly to be certain that the work is in the right destination may seem good, I believe all the dynamic advancement happened by taking risk and doing the work very fast to reach the best result at all is the better choice.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...refer to work very quickly although with taking some risks and making mistakes. O...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, while, for instance, i mean, no doubt, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47564469914 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2070776003 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527220630372 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.3303570751 48.9658058833 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.166666667 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0833333333 20.6045352989 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5833333333 5.45110844103 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228489928786 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902605209672 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07053880396 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141060140663 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376736707691 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.1575268817 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.3 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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