Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities.Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take.

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Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities.

Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.

The above issue states that the society should make efforts to save endangered species if and only if human activities results in potential extinction of the species. I believe society should persistently make efforts to save endangered although if it is not on the verge of extinction because if proper measures are not incorporated it will ultimately lead to extinction of those species.

Firstly, it is very important to protect endangered species because extinction of such species will disturb the ecosystem and have bad effects on the food cycle. Animals can be either carnivorous,herbivorous or omnivorous ,i.e, many animals depend on other animals for food. If proper measures are not taken to save endangered species it will hamper the food cycle which will in turn affect the daily life of other species. If strong initiative is not taken to protect endangered species it might also lead to decline in population of other species.

Secondly, it is necessary for the society to take preemptive measures to avoid the problem of potential extinction rather than taking measures when extinction becomes a threat.Consider the case when approximatelt 1000 tigers were left in the world. At that time many countries came together to ensure that there is no further decline in population of tigers. Many organizations were formed to spread the awareness and ensure population of tiger burgeons. Because of initiatives taken by society today the population of tiger is flourished. This is a concrete example which suggests it is very important to take measures in advance to save endangered species.

However, the measures taken in advance will require plethora of funds and manpower to not only ensure poplution declines bus also make sure there is proper balance of the species with respect to the ecosystem. The amount incorporated to save endangered species will be higher but it will also have a good impact on nature and there will be a balance in the ecosystem as well.

Therefore it is necessary for the society to come together and make enough efforts to save endangered species rather than waiting for the arrival of potential extinction. This will protect our natural heritage from getting vanished.To ensure the balance of ecosystem and food cycle and also avoid the potential risk of extinction it is significant to take measures in advance to save endangered species.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , herbivorous
...cycle. Animals can be either carnivorous,herbivorous or omnivorous ,i.e, many animals depend...
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Line 3, column 222, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...er carnivorous,herbivorous or omnivorous ,i.e, many animals depend on other animal...
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Line 3, column 276, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...imals depend on other animals for food. If proper measures are not taken to save e...
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Line 3, column 425, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...affect the daily life of other species. If strong initiative is not taken to prote...
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Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Consider
...asures when extinction becomes a threat.Consider the case when approximatelt 1000 tigers...
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Line 5, column 456, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nd ensure population of tiger burgeons. Because of initiatives taken by society today t...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... a balance in the ecosystem as well. Therefore it is necessary for the society to come...
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Line 9, column 233, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
... natural heritage from getting vanished.To ensure the balance of ecosystem and foo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, with respect to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2008.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 387.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18863049096 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92834523528 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.416020671835 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 667.8 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8581989246 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.866666667 118.986275619 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268908666021 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106768730666 0.0831039109588 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939754857597 0.0758088955206 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177871761359 0.150359130593 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0898150186795 0.0667264976115 135% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.8420337079 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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