Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities.Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take.

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Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities.

Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.

How far should we as society attempt to save the endangered species? Should we save them only in case we have caused harm to them or we must help them because we understand their pain? While, human population have increased from 2 billion to 8 billion in the past 200 years, many species have died because of our attack on their natural habitat. There are many species that have become extinct due to human encroachment, and have suffered a great loss.

First, considering the Indian tigers, which are found in western parts of India, have been declining since many decades, and the figure has decreased to only 1000. And, they are still endangered. They are basically hunted and killed for selfish needs of human, which includes their skin and various body parts. Although, they are the predators but they are balancing the food chain and natural life cycle, which may get imbalanced due to human intervention. These creatures hunt the weak links of the wild part and keep the wild life healthy. If we as policy makers, doesn't save them by imposing severe punishments on the hunters, then the whole wild life balance many change, and overall health of other species may get affected.

Additionally, because of global warming, many polar regions and species residing their are getting affected. Even though, we are not directly harming them, the temperature rise is causing polar life a great danger. We, as a society, can take steps to overcome this environmental change, by encouraging more eco-friendly products.This may cause a little damage in the current market functionality, but if steps are not taken today, it may cause more in the future; some estimate the expenses to undo these effects will cost many more trillions of dollars in future.

Not only the terrestrial life, but also the aquatic life is being seriously hampered by human presence. The rise in water temperature resulted in loss of many coral reefs. Alongwith this, immense fishing has left many aquatic species in state of near extinction. They can be saved by taking proper policy measures, which may impose a limit on fishing troops, of some species, that are on the verge of potential extinction. All of this, will cause disruption of fishing industry, but will bear fruits in the long term.

To recapitulate, there is an exigent need of implementing a policy, by keeping in mind the terrestrial, aquatic and polar life balance. Also, society should make efforts to save all the endangered species, on the verge of potential extinction. We are humans, who can understand other's pain, thus it is our duty to save them, by bearing some temporary pain.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, still, then, thus, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2205.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 443.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97742663657 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60291142739 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541760722348 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 690.3 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6773478523 60.3974514979 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0952380952 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61904761905 5.21951772744 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167149487717 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556111942959 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591997213707 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0941725774052 0.150359130593 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365237959419 0.0667264976115 55% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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