society should prepare its young people of leadership in government, industry, or other fields by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, rather than competition.
The speaker contends that the best way to prepare young people for leadership in many fields is by cultivating a sense of cooperation instead of competition. However, is it enough for cooperation alone to lead to success? I personally do not think so. Admittedly, cooperation is important in today's world, but a sense of competition is indispensable as well.
No matter it is in government, industry, or any other fields, leadership is all about uniting people into a cohesive group and guiding them to achieve common goals. Everyone contributes their parts to the success and only if every one of them works toward one direction could they ultimately be successful. Therefore, cooperation plays a significant role in every organization. Leader is responsible for setting the cultural tone for an organization and promoting the sense of cooperation, which is why a leader should learn how to cooperate in the first place.
What's more, cooperation also exists between organizations. It is impossible for an organization to live on its own, especially with the development of globalization. Government of different countries need to reach consensus, for example, on trade policies and help each other when catastrophes happen. This is also true in the business world. Take Apple Co. as an example, it outsources the production to many other companies in or outside of the United States. Without the cooperation with those manufacturing partners, Apple would at least be less profitable. Cooperation enables organizations to utilize other's strengths and compensate for their own weaknesses. Therefore, gaining a sense of cooperation is crucial for a successful leader.
However, the fact that competition is also of great significance cannot be ignored. One would easily be complacent without comparing with others. With competition, an organization has no choice but to continually improve itself because otherwise it would perish and this encourages innovation and development, which is beneficial not only for the organization, but also for the whole society. A leader without the sense of competition would be overly focused on himself, having no knowledge about how the world and his competitors are changing, being unable to keep abreast with the trend and hence easily be defeated.
To sum up, the sense of competition is as important as sense of cooperation and a society should prepare its youngsters for leadership by instilling in them both the senses if they are to succeed.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, at least, for example, to sum up, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 30.0 12.9106741573 232% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2104.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 394.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34010152284 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20368114559 2.79657885939 115% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55076142132 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 671.4 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.7868666592 60.3974514979 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.19047619 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7619047619 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61904761905 5.21951772744 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209491619243 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544406906281 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871823889205 0.0758088955206 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144856418028 0.150359130593 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103194137787 0.0667264976115 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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