For a society to truly flourish, dissent should be encouraged.
The author states that for a society to truly flourish, dissent should be encouraged and I agree with the author on this as I believe that everyone should be given the right to voice their opinion as that is what will lead to a fair society. The following points will elucidate my stance on this topic.
Dissent means that there is a difference of opinion occuring. Diferrence of opinion means that that the people of the society have different ideas about a particular topic. These different ideas should always be voiced and should be taken into consideration while taking any decision these decisions affect the entire society as a whole. Moreover, I believe in equality and I believe that in order to maintain this equality in the society, every person should have the right to speak for themselves and should be able to put forth their thoughts.
As mentioned earlier, any kind of decisions or changes that are made in the society, affect the entire society and hence everyone's opinion must matter. Dissent arises because people have a difference of opinion. The decision that affect the society as a whole should be made by taking into consideration what will benefit the society the most. When everyone's opinions are considered, it helps the leaders understand the problems faced by the society and they can take decisions to fix these problems accordingly. But dissent is not only beneficial for solving problems, for a society to flourish, a number of decisions have to be taken regarding a wide range of topics like econimoc development, infrastructure development, employment, etc. Dissent can help in understanding the public stance on any of these areas as well. For example, if the government is deliberating about constructing a community center by demolishing a park in the society, thene there obviously will be people who will be in favor of the construction and there will be people against the construction. Some people might want the park to remain as it is the last remaining parks of the town, and others want the community center because they want increased community engagement. In such a situation, dissent will obviously arise. But it will help the government understand how many people want the park and how many people want the community center and along with this they can also put forward any other reason for them supporting a particular decision. Thus it will help the government make an informed decision that is in favor of majority of the people and also provide alternate solutions for people against the decision.
That being said, I have to agree that at times, too must dissent on all the matters leads to a cacophonous society. Sometimes the quarrels can increase to a great extent and this can lead to indecision. This may result in stemming the growth of the society. But announcing decisions and discouraging dissent will not work. As differences are always going to be there, what needs to be done is overcoming these differences through compromise and decisions acceptable to all.
In conclusion, I highly agree that dissent should be encouraged for a society to truly flourish as that is what gives the government an idea of the needs and opinions of it's constituents and hence they can work accordingly to fulfil them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: that
...n occuring. Diferrence of opinion means that that the people of the society have differen...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... them supporting a particular decision. Thus it will help the government make an inf...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, hence, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 28.0 12.4196629213 225% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2732.0 2235.4752809 122% => OK
No of words: 549.0 442.535393258 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97632058288 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84053189512 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77815100959 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.409836065574 0.4932671777 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 867.6 704.065955056 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.0770513131 60.3974514979 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.782608696 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8695652174 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26086956522 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391229275821 0.243740707755 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114367852678 0.0831039109588 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124125447537 0.0758088955206 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281137341912 0.150359130593 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115035762368 0.0667264976115 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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