There are many components which acts as contributing factor to make leaders successful. Whether leaders are required to be competitive or cooperative to be successful is a topic of debate among the people from different walks of life. I believe that both the factors are important to be a good and efficient leader. I would like to explore this further in the following essay.
First and foremost, in business world leaders are required to be competitive. In today's world where there is cut-throat competition among companies, it is difficult to survive if the people in high positions are not competitive enough. The feeling of competition acts as motivation to make progress and development. It helps to perform work with efficacy. If leaders are motivated to make their organisation number one in the local or global market, then they will act in that direction with zeal. This is in turn makes the society and nation to make progress. For example, there are many brands available in the market for the same product. Thus, competition is very high, if the leaders of the organisation are not competitive enough then new products launched will not be able to survive in the market, as it requires great effort to sell the product to customers, when options are already present in the market. This efforts come from the sense of competition.
Secondly, I would like give one more example to bolster the point that competition is a vital factor for a leader to become successful. Take the examples of students, nowadays, there is very tough competition among students. In such situation, competition helps them to pay attention in their studies and do well in the examinations. If there is no competition then no student will put much effort to understand things properly because they do not have any motivation to pass the exams with flying colors and to attain first position in the class. Thus, it increases the understanding of knowledge they gain and helps them to achieve desired goal.
Last but not the least, as discussed above competition is significant to excel in any field, however, there are certain areas such as politics, humanitarian field or people within an organisation, where sense of cooperation and willingness is more important factor for leaders to possess. Leaders in field of politics act towards the benefits of people of society. If the political parties do not cooperate each other, it will be very difficult for a nation to prosper. In such cases, the willingness of leaders plays vital role for any society to develop. Moreover, in an organisation, a project is successfully delivered to the client, with the cooperation of team members. Here the duty of the leader is to make sure that people within different teams work with cooperation. Otherwise, it will be difficult to manage the work and to finish it within given time-frame. For example, if the development team does not cooperate with testing team to make the code error free then it is hard to complete the work efficiently. In such case, leaders steps in and makes sure that people from different team cooperates each other.
To sum up, it is important to have competitive attitude in leaders to make company successful. However, in government or jobs related to the public welfare, a leader should have cooperative nature as it promotes growth and prosperity of the society. Therefore, the leader should possess different characteristic as per the demand of the situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 92.0 58.6224719101 157% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 12.9106741573 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2900.0 2235.4752809 130% => OK
No of words: 578.0 442.535393258 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01730103806 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90322654589 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88892938715 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 215.323595506 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.446366782007 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 927.9 704.065955056 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.296121645 60.3974514979 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6666666667 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 5.21951772744 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 10.2758426966 214% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293517046998 0.243740707755 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794942921254 0.0831039109588 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729256202211 0.0758088955206 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168609199976 0.150359130593 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0913786368521 0.0667264976115 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 100.480337079 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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