Some people believe that college students should consider only their own talents and interests when choosing a field of study. Others believe that college students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Choosing a field of study is one of the major decision in a students life. Student's future depends on this single decision. So there is no need to mention that one should be careful while committing to a field of study. Personally, I believe that a
student, especially a college student should consider only their own talents and interests to make such decision.
Nobody knows for sure which field of study will provide higher job opportunities in the future, but we know for sure that no field of study will flourish forever. So, whichever field the student will choose, it will have good and bad times like rest of the others.
When a student chooses a field of his/her interest, he/she will most likely to get a job, which he/she loves. Going to work is a blissful experience. Because, they love their work they put extra efforts, which leads to success. To put it simply people who love their job are happy. Most of the successful person have one thing in common, they love their work.
In conclusion, interest and own talent should be the only parameters to decide the field of study, jobs will come along. We know time changes, and so does the fields with greater job availabilties, so it will not be a wise decision to choose a field of study on the bases of job availability.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...study is one of the major decision in a students life. Students future depends on this s...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d of study. Personally, I believe that a student, especially a college student sh...
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Line 5, column 246, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'peoples'?
Suggestion: peoples
...hich leads to success. To put it simply people who love their job are happy. Most of t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 58.6224719101 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1065.0 2235.4752809 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 230.0 442.535393258 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63043478261 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.55969084622 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48857123014 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 215.323595506 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55652173913 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 704.065955056 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7872238959 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9230769231 118.986275619 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6923076923 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 5.21951772744 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.44721217113 0.243740707755 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150716372095 0.0831039109588 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111572181662 0.0758088955206 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257197907264 0.150359130593 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0921638243309 0.0667264976115 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 14.1392134831 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 48.8420337079 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.1639044944 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 100.480337079 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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