In today's highly competitive environment, it is very crucial as well as complicated and confusing, for youngsters, to choose their field of career to have a successful and bright future. The topic presented here diligently emphasizes on one of the major decisions today's youth has to make. In my opinion, a student should be focussed on his/her own talents as well as have a pragmatic view of the current job scenario, so that he will not be disappointed if he realizes a harsh reality later on.
The realization of self talents and interests plays a major role in a student's life, not only professionally but also personally. The student should realize if he has any particular interests or affinity toward any subject. However, not many students have a clear vision of their career in the long run. In fact, when passed out through the primary education, in an adolescent age, due to lack of maturity, students really don't know in ehich field they should proceed. The role of parents is very crucial at this stage, as parents are the first teachers and mentors of their children. Parents should consider both the student's likings as well as his mental aptitude in guiding him toward any field of career.
As we look on the current job scenario worldwide, unemployment is one of the major critical problems in front of the nations. So, considering which field has good opportunities in terms of jobs as well as future growth, students should not be restricted in choosing only a particular or conventional subjects, but should dive into much deeper and explore new fields and develop the thoughts accordingly. This is key to success in this modern era of competitiveness.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...s and interests plays a major role in a students life, not only professionally but also ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ue to lack of maturity, students really dont know in ehich field they should proceed...
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...ould consider both the students likings as well as his mental aptitude in guiding him towa...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ding him toward any field of career. As we look on the current job scenario w...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is modern era of competitiveness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, however, if, look, really, so, well, as to, in fact, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 2235.4752809 63% => OK
No of words: 284.0 442.535393258 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94014084507 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87972850158 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580985915493 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 704.065955056 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1121401545 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.916666667 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 5.21951772744 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309828661153 0.243740707755 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099685716701 0.0831039109588 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722472602774 0.0758088955206 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202960237193 0.150359130593 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505075528142 0.0667264976115 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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