Some people believe that corporation have a responsibility to promote the well-being societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided thay operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
The statement linking the corporations with their responsibilities plays on the recent human experience of the previous centuries. There had been no time in the history where the corporation have impacted the lived life of humnans more dramatically. A quick reflection of daily life will show that a regular day in a person life is surrounded by the corporate sector starting from banking facilities to the news and the social network. A country, willing to make a significat cotrbution on the global scale, can afford to overlook the importace of the corporate sector only at its on peril.
The statemt attmepts to differentiate the moral duties of the corporation towards the societies and environment, in which they thrive, and the ir legal commitments to the government. It is valid to expect that the corporations should contribute to the well-being of the society and the environment. Because a self-sustained and balanced environment can promote the growth of the corporation. For example, consider the companies that depend on the trees for the raw material. A well maintained forest area can facilitate the availabity of the raw material. By contributing to the conservation of the forest area they can be assured that the supply of the raw material is remains adequate.
Although it is benificial for the corporation to promote the well-being of their surrounding, it is not at all mandatory for them to participate in such activities, if they are not obliged to do so by the law. People need not sit on their behalf and expect them to promote the well being of the society and environment. The society is made of people, and once the damaged is done by the corportion, it is always the people who will have to work to make up for it. The corportions can be shutdown the people and society cannot.
Given the history of human race, there will be no limit to the number of problems, directly or indirectly, affecting the environment and the society. It is reasonable to expect that the corporation to contribute to the well-being of the society and the environment. However, leaaving it all up to them is a bit too extereme. In the end, it is the people who run the corporation and the people who will have to face the consequences of the damage done to their surroundings.
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...shutdown the people and society cannot. Given the history of human race, there w...
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... the damage done to their surroundings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1902.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 390.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87692307692 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06960668606 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458974358974 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 609.3 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9294786459 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.666666667 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.21951772744 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248736852723 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783303157226 0.0831039109588 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474575067864 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147070183186 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408142430331 0.0667264976115 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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