There is an ongoing debate about whether the corporations should take a voluntary part in giving a helping hand to the societies and environments in which they operate or should only focus on the economic growth of itself only. From my point of view, corporations should contribute to the well-being of the societies and environment surrounding it.
First of all, corporations do not work in isolation. They also require resources such as manpower, raw materials, etc. So, they have to work in harmony with the surrounding elements and do require their help for thriving. That is the reason why they should contribute and take an active part in the development of societies and environments. To illustrate, think of some food processing industry. It requires vegetables and the employes form the surrounding area for generating revenue. Hence, the organization should also help in keeping the environment and human life around it healthy which in turn will help them in their business.
However, the other school of thoughts considers that the corporations should solely concentrate on generating profit and making as much money as possible. According to law, the main purpose of such corporations is to help the economy of the country. They are not accepted to look into other matters like the development of society and conservation of the environment. And that is correct too, as there are various non-profit organizations and some government-funded NGO's which are specially appointed for the same purpose. Hence, corporations are not compelled to participate in the well-being of societies and environments.
I do admit, that legally the corporations are not obliged to take an active part in the development of their surroundings. But helping them will not only help society but also the corporation as it will be benifical for both the society and the corporation in the long run.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, look, so, well, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 305.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23606557377 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12915394435 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491803278689 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.0239758739 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8125 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6875 5.21951772744 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224770600271 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746104403534 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508480630796 0.0758088955206 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149718378145 0.150359130593 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413721080748 0.0667264976115 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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