Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well- being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Role of the corporations in the society has always been a controversial topic. One side believes that the corporations should take the responibility of the good of society and environment. While, the other side argues that if the coporate is operating within the law, then its only motto should be to make as much money as possible. My belief is that corporations affect the lives of many directly or indirectly. So it is their moral duty to advocate for well-being of the society as well as environment. The following two paragraphs elucidates why I belive so.
As mentioned earlier, coprorations have a considerable impact in the people and the surroundings, indirectly if not patent. This implies that every action or decision taken by the coporate affects the society. For example, Google, which is the go-to search engine for 90 percent of population in the world. If Google's only aim is to make as much money as possible, then they might increase the amount of ads and data mining information from the users, which is under the law as the users complied for the services. This increased data mining on users severly hits the online privacy of the users. Hence, the society is deprived of basic privacy by the desire of the company to make abundance. So, company should take the responsibility of making moral decisions and should keep in mind the well-being of the people at every point of their decisions.
Additionaly, if coporations thinks only of hoarding money, then they might exploit the customers with weak services or products. For example, Apple which is known for its creativity and after sale services, recenlty launched its new prodcut which has lead to inflation in the phone market. Moreover, the recent launch also lacks the premium features which are available with other cheaper phones. Hence, company is exploiting its customers who are not so tech savvy. Thus, if the only aim of the company is gaining money, it always leads to exploitation of its customers and degradation of its products.
One might argue that corporations formed for making profits should not bother about the society. But, since the coporations provides services or products or whatever the business might be, it involved society in some way. Hence, the belief that the coporations are all about money and pecuniary is qualifying their impact on the society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1985.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 393.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05089058524 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76103351576 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508905852417 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8615011587 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.5238095238 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249053470596 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618253908367 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518481056278 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137201451713 0.150359130593 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614568978965 0.0667264976115 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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