Technology solved problem, the ability of a human to think for themselves will not surely deteriorate.
Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well- being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Now a days, there are many corporates present in the world some of which are huge ones having great shares in the global trade market. these corporates, directly or indirectly affect the environment, society and culture of their surroundings and sometimes the world. Here both views are discussed in details.
companies have ambivalent influence on the society and the environment they operate in, some of which alleviates problems and others exacerbate them, therefore, they are responsible for their actions. For example, a corporate can have a very negative influence by processing nuclear waste and not correctly dump it, thus doing irreversible damage to the environment. Not only will the nature be severely damaged as a consequence but also the general health of people living in the nearby city and their own employees will also be endangered.
companies should also be socially responsible take Uber as an example, whose commonplace, on demand and online ride services severely damaged the taxi drivers’ income all over the world and forced many people into unemployment. As a result of their actions, many taxi drivers became unemployed or their incomes were cut short, while the company could have utilised a scheme to hire these drivers with a better working condition and revenues rather than making them jobless. To say more, Uber could have employed a more socially responsible approach for example to employ taxi drivers with a fair commission rates.
The other side of the argument states that companies are free to shoulder no social and environmental responsibility. if companies do as they please and only abide by the law then there would be catastrophic disasters global warming being one. Although it is the governments’s responsibility to regulate corporates, it does not mean that they can ignore their social and environmental ethos. corporates can improve the environment they operate in and the health of their employees, the latter directly contributes to the society. To illustrate, companies can have in-house gyms or promote exercising among their employees so that their health is improves.
In conclusion, corporates are entities residing in the same environment with people if they ignore their responsibilities the environment they reside in would become uninhabitable and their revenue will be cut short, and eventually their existence will also be endangered so they are completely responsible for the well being of the society and their environment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2123.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 392.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41581632653 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04089229976 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538265306122 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 687.6 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.1914476761 60.3974514979 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.533333333 118.986275619 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1333333333 23.4991977007 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27262977283 0.243740707755 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890572641691 0.0831039109588 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779825391594 0.0758088955206 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167063484657 0.150359130593 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0939599153763 0.0667264976115 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 14.1392134831 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 48.8420337079 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.1639044944 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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