Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
There are many controversies about corporations’ role in our society. As the author showed, some people believe that corporations have additional responsibility to improve social welfare and environment while other people insist the only role of corporations is creating money within our law system. Like many disputes in modern society, it is hard to decide which argument is correct. However, this essay will show that corporations have responsibility for our society and environment.
Admittedly, corporations are allowed to do anything for their profit if actions they have taken do not violate laws. Therefore, there is no legal responsibility that companies should consider about this issue. Also, if corporations are restricted by these kinds of demand, their profitability would be declined, and it would cause layoff which generally make more social problems. For example, in many developed countries including the United States, governments and some organizations argued and imposed more social and environmental responsibilities to companies in their countries. When these policies were implemented, people expected that more improvement on our society and environment, but they were partially correct, because companies left those countries and built new facilities in other countries which do not require such responsibilities. Therefore, results of this imposing were huge number of unemployed people, which is one of the main problems that most developed countries are suffering. As this example shows, demanding more roles for our society and environment to corporations might not be good idea for our society.
However, more actively helping our society and environment could be helpful both for our society and companies. Companies are being profitable by selling their products or service to laypeople. Therefore, helping them by providing some welfare or improving environment will be more effective way to promote their sales number. As normal people are becoming wealthier, they are paying more attention to environment and improving total happiness of societies where they are belonged. Accordingly, it is not difficult to find people who voluntarily promote some companies which have done great job for environment or society on social network service. For example, when COVID-19 situation became pandemic in every country, Alibaba donated huge amount of money and facial masks to many countries. Due to this donation and people who shared this news to others, the corporation could avoid decline in their brand power, while other Chinese companies were seriously damaged because the fact that the virus were firstly started from China. Accordingly, showing more responsibility could be a powerful method to improve corporation’s profit and society.
In sum, as discussed above, even though laws do not force corporations helping society and environment, having more responsibility for these could bring more benefit for company itself and its belonged society because it could be effective tool to promote their products or services. Therefore, corporations should remind this effect and consider giving more hands to our society and environment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2706.0 2235.4752809 121% => OK
No of words: 476.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68487394958 5.05705443957 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0451396235 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504201680672 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 867.6 704.065955056 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.10617977528 322% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2660014412 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.857142857 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09523809524 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315827544919 0.243740707755 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101948471643 0.0831039109588 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750413570915 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221116440622 0.150359130593 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063709264221 0.0667264976115 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 14.1392134831 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 48.8420337079 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.96 12.1639044944 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 100.480337079 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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