Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Corporate and the society plays an imperative role in any country because corporate produces money as well as jobs and societies are the manpower to the corporate, who are the employee in any corporate to earn money for themselves and their family. Hence, the corporate and society are mutually dependent on each other therefore, the corporate has to be concerned towards the society as well as the environment.
Furthermore, Corporate holds an essential position in the society as it provide jobs as well as it enhances the society development collectively thus, the corporations concern towards its society and environment is justified. For example, the automotive industry based in India plays a vital role in enhancing the development of their societies as they organize various campaign to promote the traffic safety rules and also donates to various schools and colleges to bolster the academy in rural areas. Additionally, they provide medical incentives to their staffs, which bolster the faith in their organisation. Also, it motivates the other member of the society to work for the wellbeing of their companion staffs and people.
The corporate has to be concerned for the environment because the environment provides the every need of human being. For example the pulp and paper industry they operate to make paper what if they do not show concern and only solely operate to make as much money as possible therefore there would come instance when no tress would be there to make paper, hence they should be planting trees and should be concerned to promote the well being of the environment to make the balance of eco system.
In sum, the corporate has to play a vital role in promoting the wellbeing of society and environment. Because what if all the industry become money oriented then, what will happen to the environment, the water would get polluted, the air would be toxic and the life on earth become hell. Hence, it is the duty of the every sector operating, besides making money, they should be very concern and should work for the well being of society and environment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 287, Rule ID: MUTUALLY_DEPENDENT_ON_EACH_OTHER[1]
Message: Use simply 'mutually dependent'.
Suggestion: mutually dependent
...y. Hence, the corporate and society are mutually dependent on each other therefore, the corporate has to be conc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, hence, if, so, then, therefore, thus, well, as to, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 349.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01146131805 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70092531885 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452722063037 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 572.4 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.0 60.3974514979 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.0 118.986275619 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.7272727273 23.4991977007 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 5.21951772744 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326440244298 0.243740707755 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132762840869 0.0831039109588 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683674653326 0.0758088955206 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205203203504 0.150359130593 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550545392682 0.0667264976115 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 14.1392134831 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 48.8420337079 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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