Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible
I believe that corporations have strong responsibilities towards promotion of well-being of society and the environment. It is true that corporations must aim at making as much money as possible, for it surely helps the economy growth in plentiful ways. Few of them being, generating more employment opportunities, other businesses flourish on which a particular corporation is dependent upon and the profits of shareholders inevitably surge. But what good is this economic growth if during this time the environment or the well-being of the people is getting harmed?
The corporations’ CEOs are the potentates in today’s era who have all the capabilities to deal with the world's problems; be it economical, social or environmental. Hence, it becomes incumbent upon them to take these responsibilities. It is not some kind of benefaction but if the environment and society in which they function is healthy, their business will flourish which otherwise would doom.
It is also true that the most successful corporations of the world have already realised this fact. For example, with feminism becoming more and more significant, almost all corporations have policies that aim to maintain a particular gender ratio. These companies range from food industry like Zomato, banks such as Goldman Sachs, Morgan Stanley to the major software juggernauts like Google and Microsoft.
In addition, the companies like Hero and Honda (now divided into two), who are the manufacturers of the vehicles run on petrol and diesel are investing huge amounts on electrical vehicles. Why? No, it’s not because of increasing petrol prices. It is because the deleterious effects of the petrol run vehicles in the environment are becoming more and more prominent everyday. Few electric vehicles are already available but are very expensive compared to their fuel-run counterparts. However, in years to come, the petrol vehicles will become absolutely obsolete.
Few years ago, industries were heavily criticised for discharging their waste in the environment and polluting the air and water severely. However, if you see today, most industries are managing their waste disposal in a very efficient way thereby preventing environmental contamination.
Hence, we see that the world is already changing. The companies from mere startups to the established juggernauts are taking intensive care to protect the society and environment in which they operate. And this has not risen from their altruistic hearts, but rather from the financial perspective it is easily discernible that to become powerful in today’s era, the responsibilities towards environment and society are equally responsible as making money, both of being totally inter-dependent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, well, for example, in addition, kind of, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2327.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 419.0 442.535393258 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55369928401 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19110839683 2.79657885939 114% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546539379475 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 738.0 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8177247754 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.35 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.95 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.21951772744 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244602592444 0.243740707755 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668957527643 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0917462744942 0.0758088955206 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118387013201 0.150359130593 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0978073095354 0.0667264976115 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 48.8420337079 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 12.1743820225 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.1639044944 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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