Cooperations contributing towards society will definitely help in growth of the environment in which it works.
Everyone’s goal in life is to become successful. The stpping stone for the ultimate success is, the growth or improvement in knowledge, experience, strength and such attributes. Therefore, it follows that, if an organisation is working towards improvment of the society, in which it works, it will eventually help that organisation in its own growth as well. For instance, in India, there is a huge trust on TATA products and services. Reason being, people of India have always seen TATA industries doing good for the people, be it through TATA trust or be it through sponsoring of events for environmental good.
Moreover, when an organisation participates in any social events, it is the employees of the organisation who actually take part. Such events help in improving awareness among the employees. Take for example, the event I had participated in “giving back” initiative on behalf of my firm. The event was of tree plantation. That event alone taught me lot of things. It helped me understand, how difficult it is to spot a point in the city, which will enable sustained growth of the plant. Not only that, it also taught me the importance of a paper, which is obtained through cutting of trees, and how much of a effort is required to obtain that. This lead me and my colleagues to have optimal use of the paper which, in turn, will save the cost of firm.
While it is comparitively easy for a larger, more stable organisations to participate in such activities, it can be equally difficult for organisations which are in start-up phase. Phase where they are uncertain of even producing profit! For such organisations there primary goal, atleast for first few years, should be to make profit. Once the firm seems relatively stable then it should definitely participate in such “giving back” events.
In the conclusion, while, I agree that there can be some issues for start-up organisations to contribute to society. But I have a strong opinion that every organisation should have some helping hand for its society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 618, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...rough cutting of trees, and how much of a effort is required to obtain that. This...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 357.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08683473389 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06246384587 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546218487395 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.9679434975 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5789473684 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7894736842 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31578947368 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0978303878431 0.243740707755 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0294731702276 0.0831039109588 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313813877753 0.0758088955206 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0661614961616 0.150359130593 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203929315333 0.0667264976115 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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