The Issue whether or not Corporations have responsibility towards society and environment is a contentious one. I believe corporations should obey law and try to make as much money as possible. Because unless corporation make profit, the development is going to halt. Also, if rules and regulation is provided wisely and make corporations follow the rules then both society and corporation can prosper.
First, main goal of a corporation is to earn money. If it focuses on social development, then its primary goal of making money will hamper. Which may lead to destruction of that corporation. For example, big technology company like Facebook, Google is creating advanced technology for us. To create advanced technology, lots of money needs to be invested. If these company focus on social and environmental development, then they might lose their profit and eventually it will hamper their investment in developing higher technology. So, corporations main focus should be making profit not on social development.
Second, if we can impose proper rules and regulations on corporations then we can force them to promote the wellbeing of society and environment. For example, Big manufacturing industry like car companies produce lots of carbon di oxide every day. If we make laws that these company which emit huge amount of CO2 in the environment have to plant trees which produce equal amount of oxygen, then we can prevent greenhouse effect. So creating prudent laws and regulation can one way of making corporation invest towards betterment of society and environment.
On the other hand, some people believe that corporation should take responsibility towards society and environment on its own. But the problem with that notion is that which corporation should promote how much is a big question. Again if there is no clear rules and regulation then corporation will not get any guidance how to act for the development of society and environment.
In conclusion, even though some people believe that corporations have some responsibility toward society and environment, I believe that if laws and regulation is properly imposed then both society and corporations can be benefited.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: whether
The Issue whether or not Corporations have responsibility toward...
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... and environmental development then they might lose their profit and eventually i...
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...ng higher technology. So, corporations main focus should be making profit not on social ...
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...us should be making profit not on social development. Second, if we can impos...
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... like car companies produce lots of CO2 everyday. If we make laws that these company w...
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...CO2 everyday. If we make laws that these company which emit huge amount of CO2 in...
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...he environment have to plant tress which produce equal amount of O2, then we can ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 28.0 12.9106741573 217% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1881.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 346.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43641618497 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08404255056 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479768786127 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.0960590831 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2105263158 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05263157895 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.97078651685 463% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330836377852 0.243740707755 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103705005526 0.0831039109588 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0928502180495 0.0758088955206 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952547042834 0.150359130593 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0911081864914 0.0667264976115 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.1639044944 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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