Corporations act as an important component in the progress of a society. Thus, making money and operating within laws contributes in the development of a nation. However, I believe that it is responsibility of organisations to maintain the equilibrium in environment in which they are operating, as maintaining balance in nature is as vital as operating within laws to make money. People are responsible to take care of the mother nature, which is exploited by them for their advancement. I would like to explore this further in the following essay.
First and foremost, corporations exploit environment for there benefits. Thus, in turn it is there responsibility to take good care of it, otherwise society should get ready to bear its consequences. For example, animal skin is used by many famous brands to make handbags. In order to fulfill customer demands many animals are killed to make the products. If these animals are not taken care of, then it will lead to extinction of respective species which are exploited and this is in turn will affect the food chain negatively. Hence, it is the responsibility of corporations to maintain balance between environment and work.
Besides this, many plants have medicinal qualities. If these plants are exploited vigorously by organisations to do researches or make medicines and are not planted with same intensity than it may lead to extinction of such plants. This in turn will affect the human race badly. Therefore, corporations may take advantage of flora and fauna but at the same time it is there responsibility to take good care of them so that a balance is always maintained.
Last but not the least, there are many factories contributing to the pollution of the environment, this issue should be addressed by them, as pollution causes myriad number of problems for people living in that environment. Though, corporations aim is to make money but they should not make progress at the cost of nature. Natural resources should be used, at the same time needs of future generation should be kept in mind. Making money is a chief factor for any corporation but this should be done wisely. I would like to shed light in this with the help of an example. Decades ago, the CFC's used in AC's and refrigerators resulted a hole in ozone layer. Ozone layer protect us from bad UV rays. These companies neglected the bad effects of CFC's in order to make money and thus, people has to suffer the consequences of it. This clearly shows that, for a company taking care of the environment is as important as making profits.
To sum up, I would like to reiterate my point that financial success is a significant factor for any corporation and it also helps society to progress, but at the same the environment should not be neglected. Derelict behavior towards the nature may lead to problems for people living in that environment. Thus, it should be of paramount importance for the companies to take care of the environment along with making money.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, as to, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 82.0 58.6224719101 140% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2495.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 507.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92110453649 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74517233601 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92706023994 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4516765286 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 804.6 704.065955056 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.7796322457 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4074074074 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231603026529 0.243740707755 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635473711513 0.0831039109588 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663604629897 0.0758088955206 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142719703415 0.150359130593 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866313516478 0.0667264976115 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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