Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts.
According to the statement, there are two positions about government funding art. First position supports that government funding art is necessary to ensure the art's availability and growth to all people. And in the other hand, that this kind of subside threatens the integrity of the arts. In my view, the claim that more closely align is that estate financing is really important in order to burgeon and reach everyone.
In history, art has always been extremely important. if you study art, you can acknowledge the political and economic situation that the country was encountered or is facing. it is a way that artists express their opinions, ideas and feelings. For instance, in Europe, which in my opinion is the center of culture and art, you can meet many artists there, since Michelangelo, Leonardo da Vinci, Van Gogh until Bansky. Bansky is a modern artist that express his opinion towards art. some examples of his art is the painting of animals in the jail, representing that he gainsays the animals commerce. Thus, art is not only important to understand the country situation, but to let people express their ideas and be free to discuss them.
When government helps to fund art, ensuring to flourish and be available to everyone, is a policy that shows that this particular country is in favor of speech freedom. Also, encourage people to boost their knowledge not only about their own country, but worldwide. In my opinion, art can open your mind and in some ways can touch people in a different manner.
Otherwise, others believe that government subsiding art can threaten the integrity of art. Looking at countries such as north Korea, Venezuela, certainly is possible. Because, if we see north korean government, they blind people with bogus information. they teach people to hate western countries, giving in schools books that demonstrate americans as harmful people. So they grow only with information that the estate gave them. Therefore, if they decide to fund an exposition or museum, surely they will expose only arts of what they want the population to see. Consequently, damaging the integrity of art.
Hence, given the views, the statement that most align with my opinion is that government should provide art funding. art is extremely important for education, where people can study others countries view or can understand what people are thinking about some issue. it is a way to express feeling and ideas, where every government should support that. In addition, when a country encourages art, they and supporting education and freedom of speech.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, if, look, really, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.3162921348 186% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2172.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 425.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11058823529 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66636099748 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538823529412 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 661.5 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5213364889 60.3974514979 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.88 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92 5.21951772744 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.542611835331 0.243740707755 223% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149752961157 0.0831039109588 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139500200758 0.0758088955206 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.31156124535 0.150359130593 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543808222981 0.0667264976115 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.