Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts Write a response in which you d

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Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.

The arts forms an exceptionally important aspect of any society, bringing people together, expressing key sentiments of the time, and creating an impression of today's society for future generations. However, the arts is also a highly competitive field with minimal funding that is unequally distributed to favor the more popular names in the field. This makes it more difficult for the more impoverished or underprivileged sectors of society to get involved in arts, and thus shuts them out of the cultural narrative. A naive solution to this issue calls for government funding of the arts, so art can become more accessible.

On the face of it, government funding is a sensible solution. Funding school or community art programs, like painting or writing classes, is critical to making it feasible for everyone to learn and benefit from the arts. If the government can go even further and universally subsidize supplies, even better. However, funding bodies that contract particular art pieces or oversee museums have a great degree of control over the nature of art produced, which creates a serious issue where government funding on the arts could threaten its integrity by unduly influencing what is created. Since the government is typically more representative of its more affluent and privileged citizens, rather than making arts more accessible, this will actually limit the freedom of the arts! For example, governments are already able to regulate what kind of content can be found in television or movies by including age ratings or completely banning some of them. This is important, to an extent, because it protects children from being exposed to gory horror movies like the Human Centipede. But, it also means that media representing marginalized groups, like the LGBTQ community, often gets additional, unfair restrictions placed on them depending on the particular government. One only has to think of the fact that Love, Simon, an innocent, LGBT teenage coming of age movie was banned or rated R in multiple countries. If governments were funding the movies, such a movie could never have been made at all.

Furthermore, arts funding in today's world has changed significantly from the past. Podcasts are a growing medium that is primarily funded by Kickstarters or Patreon campaigns, which are crowdfunding websites where you can pledge your favorite shows a certain amount of money. This removes the issues of biased funding or advertisements from larger corporations and instead gives the funding power in ordinary people's hands, which allows the creation of much more represntative and diverse media that better responds to and preserves the cultural consciousness of the society. Additionally, these new, emerging types of media and funding are avenues that the slow government response would be unable to keep up with. Thus, relying on government funding would not only limit the content, but also the innovativeness of the arts.

Finally, a lot of artistic content is now generated by online creators. Be it jokes on the twitter, or cute cartoons, or a self-made youtube channels, artists from all fields have a lot more options today, which allows them greater freedom of expression than government funding could. Additionally, there is a large amount of diversity and dissent generated on these platforms, which is crucial to promoting a greater speed and flexibility in our evolving society. No government will be funding meme creators, but they are a valuable part of the online identity of our modern society, especially for the youth. Thus, government funding for the arts would curtail the evolution into these new mediums.

Thus, government funding for art programs and supplies is important to creating platforms for people to learn and grow. But governments should not be funding particular artists or art pieces, because they are not always representative of the interests of individuals in society and would limit artists in both form and content. Today, several alternatives to source funding exist, and so the art funding issue can be alleviated through other, less restrictive and more representative options.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'form'.
Suggestion: form
The arts forms an exceptionally important aspect of an...
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Line 3, column 1470, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[7]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'have' and 'been'.
Suggestion: have never been
... funding the movies, such a movie could never have been made at all. Furthermore, arts fundi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, as to, for example, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 32.0 14.8657303371 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 81.0 58.6224719101 138% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3500.0 2235.4752809 157% => OK
No of words: 661.0 442.535393258 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2950075643 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.07049507093 4.55969084622 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91340645612 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 346.0 215.323595506 161% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523449319213 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 1088.1 704.065955056 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.77640449438 450% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.1137620982 60.3974514979 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.615384615 118.986275619 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4230769231 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57692307692 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406840084243 0.243740707755 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117899616901 0.0831039109588 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819998177681 0.0758088955206 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252077386984 0.150359130593 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633962636474 0.0667264976115 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 186.0 100.480337079 185% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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