Some people believe that it is helpful to view a challenging situation as an opportunity for
personal growth. Others believe that reimagining challenging situations this way occupies
too much of the focus one needs to face challenges effectively.
Life is full of challenges we face daily. It is very crucial to have the ability to face challenging situations. Thus, we should be looking at challenging situations as an opportunity for personal growth. Personal growth is not the only benefit for effectively face our challenges there are many benefits one can get from being in a challenging situation, group and country growth can also result from challenging situations if they are managed effectively.
First, people can get use challenging situations as a boost to their future goals. For example, as an international student, when I decided to pursue my graduate degree in the USA I have been facing a lot of challenges regarding my English language. The language barrier hindered me from clearly communicating with other students. That was a challenging situation for me, but I didn't give up and I continued to boost up my vocabulary and used every new word I learned in a sentence. Furthermore, I used to stick post-its papers all over my room to remind me of new words learned every week. Without facing that challenge I wouldn't be able to buttress my weak language to a better level.
Second, a challenging situation is not merely meant to be for personal growth, it is also imperative to consider that a whole country can benefit from challenging situations. For example, Iraq has invaded Kuwait in 1990, which resulted in many deaths and oil field burning chaoses. Although the war was very destructive and harmful, the Kuwaiti government has gained so many benefits from this war. Which giving more focus in the army department to avoid any further wars from any other country or from Iraq. Not only focusing on the exterior development but focusing on the interior development of the country like teaching people how to deal with casualties like war or invasions.
To summarize, challenging situations is not only helpful for personal growth, but it can also support a whole country or a group of people when they face it. From challenging situations people can learn how to effectively manage their future decisions and know what weaknesses they have, so they can easily face the same or similar situations more robustly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...s a challenging situation for me, but I didnt give up and I continued to boost up my ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...y week. Without facing that challenge I wouldnt be able to buttress my weak language to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, regarding, second, so, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 367.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02179836512 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86732149708 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514986376022 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.361929169 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.411764706 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5882352941 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76470588235 5.21951772744 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321716995141 0.243740707755 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118484065575 0.0831039109588 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820716249408 0.0758088955206 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217568663491 0.150359130593 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806446671946 0.0667264976115 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.