Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise. Others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Political leaders are the backbone for a country. Every country thrives rely upon the effective leader. Senator should take decisions which are useful for everyone lives in society. I agree, effective leader should loyal and stand on his principles, moral values and objectives.
In order to developing a nation, effective senator ought to be rigid. He can considered public decision as well, look at all the issues and problems they faced and then make a best judgement which is valuable for a state and country. Public can be wrong in their decision, sometimes they cannot made good decision on slavery and war. If we take an example of Abrahim Lincholn, he is a leader which strengthened a federal government, fought against slavery, modernized the economy.
Mahatma Gandhi is an example another example, he was campniging against independent India, spread the awareness to whole nation. He fought against poverty, women rights, ending untouchability and many more. Sometimes people can be wrong direction and accept immoral things, he changed the point of view of the public and dreamt about the independent India.
A senator must listens and understands the people’s problems, thinks and confront the situation, yield the public opinion, may be people give good solution to the problem. However, an effective leader ought not abandon principle or morals, so that whole country suffer because of this decision which is made for the sake of compromise.
In the nutshell, an effective leader should considered public’s opinion. Citizens of a country may be right sometimes but not all the time. Therefore, a senator listens people problems and understand it, stick to their principles and then make a decision which is beneficial for a whole nation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'right'.
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... opinion. Citizens of a country may be right sometimes but not all the time. Therefore, a sena...
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...which is beneficial for a whole nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, so, then, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 58.6224719101 39% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 282.0 442.535393258 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28368794326 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78327909542 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563829787234 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6753276935 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.125 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.21951772744 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264691617878 0.243740707755 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932855013764 0.0831039109588 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696259306447 0.0758088955206 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161632897317 0.150359130593 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783105095319 0.0667264976115 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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