Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise. Others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Considering the situation that permits someone to be the president of a country could perfectly reflect the the response of that scenario. Public opinions are not constructive always to produce solutions of a particular problem and that complexity becomes more fiasco to a leader who sights the reason and the path to resolve. To tackle these bidirectional troubles, leaders are forced to be more rigid on their goals: most of them even prevent the mass protests in order to result a great benefit to the nation.
However, in modern society, with the help of social and mass media, a population could be miss-guided through fake information; therefore, a public opinion tends to fortify the obstacle to the leaders to take decisions. In that case, leaders confront pressing scenarios and sometimes are forced to be offensive. For instance, during the pandemic session, most of the governments faced unparalleled difficulties to control mass opinion. Circumstances may differ due to places and conditions, but a huge percentage of constituents of many countries depreciate the lock-down strategy. By being strict on their position and objective, leaders have met the disaster and successfully eliminated the spread of the virus.
In conclusion, it has to be understood that public opinion can be made on random consideration of a problem, but the real solution comes form the stiff objective having decisions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, therefore, as to, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 33.0505617978 30% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1189.0 2235.4752809 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 224.0 442.535393258 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30803571429 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.55969084622 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03938525416 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620535714286 0.4932671777 126% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 704.065955056 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.535168694 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.111111111 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8888888889 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.21951772744 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184930674541 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720754688949 0.0831039109588 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331032194085 0.0758088955206 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119881236199 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266735298887 0.0667264976115 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 14.1392134831 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.47 8.38706741573 125% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.