Some people believe that in order to thrive, a society must put its own overall success before the well-being of its individual citizens. Others believe that the well-being of a society can only be measured by the general welfare of all its people.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
It is obvious that the overall success of the society is important; however, it depends on the situation that how much it is going to cost and how much it is going to hurt normal people. On the other hand, it is impossible to make every citizen happy because the poverty has always been existed. On my opinion, welfare of the people should become before overall accomplishment of the society depending on the situation.
Economic growth is definitely always good for every society, but it depends on how much it is going to interrupt citizens welfare. For example, factories those produce high quality of products to sell and make a good profit which make economic development for the society. At the same time, they might discharge all the pollution to a river close to people’s houses which is not good because later or sooner most of the residents on that area need to move somewhere else against their wills. That is not a good way to be successful.
Additionally, victory in Wars is important if it won’t make normal people hard. If the government only care about success in War and not welfare of the people, general citizens will get in trouble. If the government spends all the nation money on weapons and military families what will happen to normal people. They will be hungry with no food, so obviously this is not a moral way to earn the victory.
However, it is impossible to bring happiness to every citizen life. It is really good that low-income families can have free or cheap health insurance and food stamps in California, but the poverty still does exist. There are still many homeless in different parts of the California who will always suffer from the poverty.
The overall achievement of the society is good but only when it does not make normal people lives hard. On the other hand, even with putting people welfare before overall accomplishment of the society, unhappy citizens still exist because it is not possible to make everybody’s life perfect. However, as a conclusion, people well-being must be more important than society achievement to handle difficult situations better.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, so, still, well, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1760.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 360.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88888888889 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62840020817 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508333333333 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.765259326 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.529411765 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1764705882 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.29411764706 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230182974119 0.243740707755 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750287006463 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703625566617 0.0758088955206 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127568112573 0.150359130593 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.099552394903 0.0667264976115 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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