Some people believe that success in creative fields, such as painting, fiction writing, and filmmaking, primarily requires hard work and perseverance. Others believe that such success mainly requires innate talents that cannot be learned.
In today’s world there are plethora of achievers, who started developing interest towards their field from young age and worked hard to accomplish it in the future. Innate talents are quite helpful to flourish in their careers but just dreaming about success without hard work and perseverance will go in vain.
We all must have come across the aphorism, “Practice makes a man perfect” that emphasis the role of practice in achieving success. Not everyone who has interest in a creative field is innate talents. Only few born with inborn talents and many will need to work hard to accomplish what they want to in their respective fields. For example, Michael Jordan who is now known as a popular basket ball player was dropped off from school team for not playing well. Without intense practice and perseverance he would not have been what he is now. If a skill is practised over and over, eventually the person would become adroit.
Hard workers will definitely reap success, but one should have the patience and consistence till it pays off. One should consider each failure as an opportunity to test how far they have improved their skills and to identify the areas in which they lag. Meanwhile day by day, failure by failure, people would really be growing and be on the verge of success. When we look into the life of Oprah Winfrey, she had a terrible childhood and she was even fired from a television channel saying “Unfit for TV”, but then the channel would have never known that she would become one of the most influential persons in TV and first black woman to become a billionaire. She has not got everything in her initial days of hard work but her persistence garnered her success in due course.
However, people with inherent talents would be able to accomplish much faster than others who does hard work, but still they should work hard to shine. A Person even when he is talented, without practice would fail. Skills of children ultimately fade away when it is not nurtured in the beginning. A skill when it is enhanced and upgraded would be more conspicuous and could get easy recognition and this improvisation completely relies on hard work and perseverance
Therefore, anyone can reach success by constant practice and patience. Hard work and perseverance are the only key for success. Only with practice one can sharpen the existing flair. Perhaps, innate talents act as catalyst to speed up the journey of success but that relies on hard work too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, really, so, still, then, therefore, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2061.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 426.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83802816901 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52236464307 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542253521127 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2565141707 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.05 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55 5.21951772744 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19839937139 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690822258298 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657060732232 0.0758088955206 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126970424505 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384834758227 0.0667264976115 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.