Some people believe that teaching morality should be the foundation of education Others believe that teaching a foundation of logical reasoning would do more to produce a moral society

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Some people believe that teaching morality should be the foundation of education. Others believe that teaching a foundation of logical reasoning would do more to produce a moral society.

In today's world there are myriad ways by which a foundation built can substantiate the reasoning and livelihood of the individuals.In my opinion i perspicuously agree that teaching morality should be the the base of the education.
People from manifold backgrounds of multiple ethnicity ,culture ,religion,many more have their own standards of moral value which they indulge in as well as inculcate in their progencies.For instance varied sanctions,schools ,educational institutes are present where one believes to instill such morals ,where studying ,understanding as well practical notion of it is widely meant to be inherit.Educationally speaking schools are the epitome of such base.For instance being sincere,respecting the elders ,showing affection ,behaving cordially,basic mannerism or ethics on behaving in various public or private occasions ,team spirit,selflessness,the cordial ways of representing as individuals,starts on a clean slate and gets easily imbibed .
In most nursery schools these days team spirit is always instilled ,in activities like sports,cultural events like dancing ,singing as well vocational trainings.The skills gets picked up faster and progressively reflects as the child reaches adolescence .Being of a good character is leveraged to be higher as compared to be just being a person with a behemoth degree .
The elderly which abuse their geriatric parents on basis of money ,property or their insurance cover sums,reflects poor morals despite the adults having of a solid education background.Only if the affability to being respectful and helpful were instilled in them ,they would presumably treat their old parents with incessant love and cherish them .
Just like in marriage ,being unfaithful or indulging in adultery is a lucid sign of baseless morals of an individuals who are in a pristine relationship of a vowed marriage.
With the dynamics of time there always be the morality which will benevolent to human relationship rather than just considering logics and certain amount of reasoning behind it.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, well, for instance, as well as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 307.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69381107492 5.05705443957 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.61466546884 2.79657885939 129% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661237785016 0.4932671777 134% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 23.0359550562 221% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 195.946208605 60.3974514979 324% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 291.333333333 118.986275619 245% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.1666666667 23.4991977007 218% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.21951772744 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 41.0 7.80617977528 525% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231260819785 0.243740707755 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109237144759 0.0831039109588 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555410072502 0.0758088955206 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109237144759 0.150359130593 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555410072502 0.0667264976115 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.0 14.1392134831 219% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 2.79 48.8420337079 6% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 12.1743820225 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.61 12.1639044944 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.88 8.38706741573 142% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 11.8971910112 265% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 11.2143820225 200% => OK
text_standard: 31.0 11.7820224719 263% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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