Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to work as a team than as an individual to succeed.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Just like the the famous saying -Success only comes to those who are ready to fail.It is delivered through plethora of ways under myriad circumstances.So it can be a individual notion or a team work ,but i personally am in par with the terms that it is better to work as an individual rather than a team to succeed.
The competition around the globe is rising at an exponential rate ,there is rat race to succeed and build an empire which would be shining at the summit of success.There are individuals who formulate plans and metamorphose those into actions to succeed.All the way from a student ,employee,working class communities,everybody wants to succeed on their terms and basis.For that diligence ,patience and persistence is required.Right from clearing the major blocks in the path but also sacrificing certain leisure just to reach the peaks of success.
This peregrination is a going to be arduous for one but with right approaches everything is possible.For instance the famous novel writer J K Rowling ,she started out from ground zero ,with multiple rejection faced by multinational publications ,through her inner fire to succeed she kept working tirelessly,burning the midnight oil ,till she succeded.It was Bloomsbury publication which gaver this shot and made "Harry Potter" series possible in novels and later formulated to movies.Today according to forbes magazine J K Rowling's turn over is around 1 billion dollars making her strongest women in the world.
There are salmagundi of personalities like Elon musk founder of Tesla companies ,who worked assiduously to convert plans on paper to real life .He made the the tesla car prototypes as well scripted the desired codes with the new technology to be driven with .Through his perseverance ,today tesla cars are one of the best innovation in modern day world,making him world's richest man.
In nutshell,success is a long path which has some topsy turvy turns,but with confidence as well with firm belief an individual can catapult himself through ground zero to apogee of success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Just like the the famous saying -Success only comes to th...
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...hora of ways under myriad circumstances.So it can be a individual notion or a team...
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...an be a individual notion or a team work ,but i personally am in par with the term...
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...e globe is rising at an exponential rate ,there is rat race to succeed and build a...
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...amorphose those into actions to succeed.All the way from a student ,employee,workin...
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...ns to succeed.All the way from a student ,employee,working class communities,every...
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...eed.All the way from a student ,employee,working class communities,everybody wants to su...
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...dent ,employee,working class communities,everybody wants to succeed on their terms and bas...
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Suggestion: For
...nts to succeed on their terms and basis.For that diligence ,patience and persistenc...
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Line 2, column 386, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...their terms and basis.For that diligence ,patience and persistence is required.Rig...
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...e ,patience and persistence is required.Right from clearing the major blocks in the p...
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...right approaches everything is possible.For instance the famous novel writer J K Ro...
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...ance the famous novel writer J K Rowling ,she started out from ground zero ,with m...
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Suggestion: ,
...owling ,she started out from ground zero ,with multiple rejection faced by multina...
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Line 3, column 244, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...tion faced by multinational publications ,through her inner fire to succeed she ke...
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Suggestion: , burning
...e to succeed she kept working tirelessly,burning the midnight oil ,till she succeded.It ...
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Suggestion: ,
...king tirelessly,burning the midnight oil ,till she succeded.It was Bloomsbury publ...
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...ing the midnight oil ,till she succeded.It was Bloomsbury publication which gaver ...
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... was Bloomsbury publication which gaver this shot and made 'Harry Potter' ...
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Suggestion: Today
...n novels and later formulated to movies.Today according to forbes magazine J K Rowlin...
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...trongest women in the world. There are salmagundi of personalities like Elon musk founde...
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...omen in the world. There are salmagundi of personalities like Elon musk founder ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ike Elon musk founder of Tesla companies ,who worked assiduously to convert plans ...
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Line 4, column 144, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...y to convert plans on paper to real life .He made the the tesla car prototypes as ...
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Suggestion: He
...to convert plans on paper to real life .He made the the tesla car prototypes as we...
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...rt plans on paper to real life .He made the the tesla car prototypes as well scripted t...
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...rt plans on paper to real life .He made the the tesla car prototypes as well scripted t...
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...ith the new technology to be driven with .Through his perseverance ,today tesla ca...
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...h the new technology to be driven with .Through his perseverance ,today tesla cars are ...
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Suggestion: ,
...be driven with .Through his perseverance ,today tesla cars are one of the best inn...
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... the best innovation in modern day world,making him worlds richest man. In nutshell,su...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'worlds the richest'.
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...novation in modern day world,making him worlds richest man. In nutshell,success is a long pat...
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...ing him worlds richest man. In nutshell,success is a long path which has some topsy tur...
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...ng path which has some topsy turvy turns,but with confidence as well with firm belie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19461077844 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27023553592 2.67179642975 122% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652694610778 0.524837075471 124% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 66.0 20.1344086022 328% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 155.919209849 48.9658058833 318% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 347.0 100.406767564 346% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 66.8 20.6045352989 324% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.4 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 38.0 5.5376344086 686% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169048221313 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990270815807 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639816164362 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990270815807 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639816164362 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.4 11.7677419355 309% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 4.49 58.1214874552 8% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 6.10430107527 280% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.0 10.1575268817 286% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.01 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.59 8.01818996416 145% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 10.002688172 300% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.4 10.0537634409 282% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.247311828 283% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
Just like the the famous saying -Success only comes to th...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
Just like the the famous saying -Success only comes to th...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...ly comes to those who are ready to fail.It is delivered through plethora of ways u...
^^
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...hora of ways under myriad circumstances.So it can be a individual notion or a team...
^^
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...under myriad circumstances.So it can be a individual notion or a team work ,but i...
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Line 1, column 199, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...an be a individual notion or a team work ,but i personally am in par with the term...
^^
Line 2, column 66, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e globe is rising at an exponential rate ,there is rat race to succeed and build a...
^^
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...uld be shining at the summit of success.There are individuals who formulate plans and...
^^^^^
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: All
...amorphose those into actions to succeed.All the way from a student ,employee,workin...
^^^
Line 2, column 279, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ns to succeed.All the way from a student ,employee,working class communities,every...
^^
Line 2, column 289, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , working
...eed.All the way from a student ,employee,working class communities,everybody wants to su...
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Line 2, column 315, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , everybody
...dent ,employee,working class communities,everybody wants to succeed on their terms and bas...
^^^^^^^^^^
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...nts to succeed on their terms and basis.For that diligence ,patience and persistenc...
^^^
Line 2, column 386, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...their terms and basis.For that diligence ,patience and persistence is required.Rig...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Right
...e ,patience and persistence is required.Right from clearing the major blocks in the p...
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Suggestion: For
...right approaches everything is possible.For instance the famous novel writer J K Ro...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ance the famous novel writer J K Rowling ,she started out from ground zero ,with m...
^^
Line 3, column 183, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...owling ,she started out from ground zero ,with multiple rejection faced by multina...
^^
Line 3, column 244, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...tion faced by multinational publications ,through her inner fire to succeed she ke...
^^
Line 3, column 307, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , burning
...e to succeed she kept working tirelessly,burning the midnight oil ,till she succeded.It ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 332, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...king tirelessly,burning the midnight oil ,till she succeded.It was Bloomsbury publ...
^^
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...ing the midnight oil ,till she succeded.It was Bloomsbury publication which gaver ...
^^
Line 3, column 394, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... was Bloomsbury publication which gaver this shot and made 'Harry Potter' ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Today
...n novels and later formulated to movies.Today according to forbes magazine J K Rowlin...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'salmagundies', 'salmagundis'?
Suggestion: salmagundies; salmagundis
...trongest women in the world. There are salmagundi of personalities like Elon musk founde...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 21, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...omen in the world. There are salmagundi of personalities like Elon musk founder ...
^^
Line 4, column 81, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ike Elon musk founder of Tesla companies ,who worked assiduously to convert plans ...
^^
Line 4, column 144, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...y to convert plans on paper to real life .He made the the tesla car prototypes as ...
^^
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: He
...to convert plans on paper to real life .He made the the tesla car prototypes as we...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...rt plans on paper to real life .He made the the tesla car prototypes as well scripted t...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 153, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
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...rt plans on paper to real life .He made the the tesla car prototypes as well scripted t...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 258, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...ith the new technology to be driven with .Through his perseverance ,today tesla ca...
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Suggestion: Through
...h the new technology to be driven with .Through his perseverance ,today tesla cars are ...
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Line 4, column 284, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...be driven with .Through his perseverance ,today tesla cars are one of the best inn...
^^
Line 4, column 353, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , making
... the best innovation in modern day world,making him worlds richest man. In nutshell,su...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 365, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'worlds the richest'.
Suggestion: worlds the richest
...novation in modern day world,making him worlds richest man. In nutshell,success is a long pat...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , success
...ing him worlds richest man. In nutshell,success is a long path which has some topsy tur...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 68, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
...ng path which has some topsy turvy turns,but with confidence as well with firm belie...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19461077844 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27023553592 2.67179642975 122% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652694610778 0.524837075471 124% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 66.0 20.1344086022 328% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 155.919209849 48.9658058833 318% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 347.0 100.406767564 346% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 66.8 20.6045352989 324% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.4 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 38.0 5.5376344086 686% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169048221313 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990270815807 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639816164362 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990270815807 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639816164362 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.4 11.7677419355 309% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 4.49 58.1214874552 8% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 6.10430107527 280% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.0 10.1575268817 286% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.01 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.59 8.01818996416 145% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 10.002688172 300% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.4 10.0537634409 282% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.247311828 283% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.