Technology has made it easier for people to communicate with each other. Some people prefer to talk over the phone while others prefer to communicate through text messages. Which type of communication do you prefer and why?
The 21st era has reached the zenith in terms of technology especially in the stream of communication.The myriad tools present today puts one in a dilemma to decide which one works as well suits the best, to me i ardently assert that communication via the text messaging is better as well convenient in comparison to speaking over the phone.
To begin with, there are plethora of benefits linked with using messages as platform of communication.One of which is reliability and convenience which works as easy as shooting a fish in a barrel,When a text message appears an individual gets time to think and evaluate, helping to make pragmatic decision to the questions or the topic of interest discussed.For instance, being the head of the telecommunication company Itential, i get a text message soon after presentations are over.They are regarding whether the ideas work in the favour of my company or not thereby with text messages i have the power to think, evaluate ad then type in my concern either to go for it or against it which would not be in case of receiving phone call where i had to think in the spur of the moment which could be pretty disastrous and land me in deep waters.
Furthermore, the usage of messages gives me credibility of security too.There are certain unprecedented situation where someone might be at a boisterous place like in a train or a bus or even carpooling with multiple individuals, where eavesdropping can serve as misdeameanor.Giving the perfect paradigm to this is, once i was travelling by local train in mumbai which was inundated and my mother was asking for credentials over the phone of my credit card which tend to be precarious as someone could hear the password and attain a security fraud but rather if i would have message then i could securely send my prevalent information without risking my bank details.
Therefore, to exemplify, although communicating through phone calls sound like luxury for some, it is luculent that messages as form of communication make the finish line for me.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, as for, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91907514451 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1323880224 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580924855491 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 86.0 20.1344086022 427% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 262.685529674 48.9658058833 536% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 425.5 100.406767564 424% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 86.5 20.6045352989 420% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.75 5.45110844103 436% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19719763042 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133955405156 0.076458572812 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598669401012 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133955405156 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598669401012 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 45.0 11.7677419355 382% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -15.81 58.1214874552 -27% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 6.10430107527 280% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 36.8 10.1575268817 362% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.44 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.87 8.01818996416 148% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 10.002688172 295% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 36.4 10.0537634409 362% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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