Some people believe that teaching morality should be the foundation of education. Others believe that teaching a foundation of logical reasoning would do more to produce a moral society.
A nation's success largely depends on the leaders of the society. These leaders should be the hero's or idol's of society that are inspiration for others in society. Leaders are not born leaders. They have developed skills that make them leader. Such leaders possesses values, morals, behaviour, sense of an issue, ethics etc. While some people believe that inculcating moral values should be the core of education system in people's early education, most are of the opinion that moral values are never ending process and can be learn by any other means too. So, the primary aim of education should be to empower the logical growth of all the students.
The chief reason for my view is that education system should focus on improving the skills sets of students by way of proving mentorships or scholarships to pursue their field of interest. Moreover, providing real life problems to solve would increase the student's thinking capability. For example, education system in India added "abacus" course, which helps in calculating large number system. Finally, there are many ways by which morals can be learn but the critical logical building should begin in student's early days.
Perhaps, most importantly, the sole or primary responsibility of parent, instead of education, is to imbibe moral values to its children. However, it is said that a child has some of it's morality inherited by the parent. Thus, education's foundation should be to grow child's logical thinking, participate other non-academic activities, drive in sports and sportsmanship and many more.
For all the above reason states, I therefore conclude that a society is combination of values, morals, cultures which are build in every stage of life. However, a society will become moral not only by these combination but by the progress of individuals living in those society and be an inspiration to the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
A nations success largely depends on the leaders ...
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Message: You should probably use 'possess'.
Suggestion: possess
...lls that make them leader. Such leaders possesses values, morals, behaviour, sense of an ...
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Line 7, column 202, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this combination' or 'these combinations'?
Suggestion: this combination; these combinations
...a society will become moral not only by these combination but by the progress of individuals livi...
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Message: Did you mean 'this society' or 'those societies'?
Suggestion: this society; those societies
...y the progress of individuals living in those society and be an inspiration to the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 306.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18954248366 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78363856922 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 215.323595506 81% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571895424837 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6222759572 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.25 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.21951772744 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283043435697 0.243740707755 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760048305648 0.0831039109588 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755105440764 0.0758088955206 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150820886825 0.150359130593 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758817537163 0.0667264976115 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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