People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today’s world, education plays an important role in individual’s life. Apart from food, clothing & shelter, education also form a basic need for any individuals. In any country there has been significant growth in literacy rate than a decade ago. So choosing universities or college, one should be very careful and should have profound understanding of the course to opt. However, there are various reasons for which people attend college or university such as career preparation, to increase knowledge, to pursue their dream company etc. While some people feel that people attend college to gain profound knowledge of the field which he/she is interested, most are of the opinion that people join college to get high pay jobs after completion of the course through career fair. I am of the opinion that knowledge is more important than career but the current generation does not believe in it and joins college with the aim of achieving high pay jobs.
The chief reason for my view is that people run after money through this university career programs. Also some company do require some level of education to be eligible for the position in company. This mandates every individuals to join university to get a degree with an average passing grade. However, this indirectly affects his/her knowledge in-order to just get a passing certificate. For example, IIT’s in India are popular for giving students high pay jobs from Multinational Companies. This results in increase number of applicants in IIT’s every year. Finally, it is indeed a harsh fact that people attend college just to get their degree.
Another reason for my view is that some college do provide internship opportunity in their vacations. However there are two aspect for this.
First for people who aims to get high pay jobs, would be benefited because internship adds extra value to professional knowledge and thus, helps in achieving target company. The second aspect is for the people who genuinely wants to increase their domain knowledge or expertise, this internship platform will surely benefits them. For instance, an engineering college in Mumbai, India provides compulsory internship program after third year of course. Thus , I believe that internships adds value to student’s life into entering their dream company.
For all the reasons state above, I therefore, concludes that unlike in 1990’s where people often attend college to understand the depth of their domain and become expertise in it. And now the situation is reverse. I also believe that colleges or universities should focus more on practical knowledge so that people will gain practical knowledge from their courses independent of their reasons why they attend college.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, third, thus, while, apart from, for example, for instance, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2321.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 438.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29908675799 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77650171562 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522831050228 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 728.1 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.42739826 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.913043478 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0434782609 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08695652174 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363801879944 0.236089414692 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102681635192 0.076458572812 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932682491501 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22249131267 0.150856017488 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592208712281 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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