Without teaching basic morality, a logic driven life cannot produce a moral society.
Being kind and caring is necessary and no human being can learn this on their own. Such as, a child cannot learn to be kind or caring to their siblings or their friends without their parents teaching them because, the child cannot reason about sharing chocolate or not harming the people around them through logic. Similarly, a person who has committed a crime may not be moral but can be logical in their justification because people in distress or in dire conditions will prefer to go the wrong way to ensure their survival.
Looking back at history, we can find numerous cases such as Adolf Hitler. Hitler in his youth had gone through various difficulties and has been influenced by anti-semitic propaganda. On top of it, the massive defeat of Germany in the first world war and it's economic downturn made him believe that the Jewish community was responsible for all the misery faced by Germans. If we were to give credence to logical reasoning, Hilter can be considered right in few points. But had he given morality the precedence, the Holocaust would have never occurred. Radical groups in the middle east have destroyed nations in the last decade. The current leaders and the followers of such organizations were brainwashed and were trained to believe that their cause is correct. Which shows that their morality was stripped off and they were given the logical reason to do what they do. There have been cases in the second world war where the Generals of axis forces were given orders to execute the captured enemy soldiers but, some of them chose not to by giving precedence to their morality.
There are a few cases such as legal proceedings, where logic needs to be given precedence. Because convicting a criminal who is the sole bread earner of a family may seem immoral or using violence to obtain secrets from spies or traitors may seem immoral but, inaction can be harmful to the society in such cases.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 278, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
... about sharing chocolate or not harming the people around them through logic. Similarly, a person who ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, second, similarly, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 346.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82947976879 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48139355533 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583815028902 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3697029479 60.3974514979 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.4 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0666666667 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.21951772744 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158786775057 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543671907512 0.0831039109588 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545336260112 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106972560539 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551679279797 0.0667264976115 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.