Every people needs education to get success in a particular field. to get the deep knowledge of the particular field one have to do the formal university education. In university there are subjects which student need to opt for, some of them are compulsoy and others are optional. Student have to select the subjects they want to study. I believe that the students should go through the variety of the courses. I have two main reasons for that.
First of all university education has major role in overall development of the student. By selecting the hobby courses and courses other than than job oriented courses student will get exposure to the various fields and the things they like.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
Every people needs education to get success i...
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Line 1, column 68, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...n to get success in a particular field. to get the deep knowledge of the particula...
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Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: than
...ing the hobby courses and courses other than than job oriented courses student will get e...
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Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'courses'' or 'course's'?
Suggestion: courses'; course's
...nd courses other than than job oriented courses student will get exposure to the variou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 19.5258426966 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 14.8657303371 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 33.0505617978 21% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 58.6224719101 31% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 573.0 2235.4752809 26% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 118.0 442.535393258 27% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85593220339 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.29587325169 4.55969084622 72% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49959778436 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 215.323595506 35% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64406779661 0.4932671777 131% => OK
syllable_count: 181.8 704.065955056 26% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9658315359 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.625 118.986275619 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 23.4991977007 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 5.21951772744 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.97078651685 40% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401754025046 0.243740707755 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150929144654 0.0831039109588 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0946518882203 0.0758088955206 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.301805085854 0.150359130593 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0063409259094 0.0667264976115 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 14.1392134831 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 100.480337079 29% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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